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Poems - Only In the Eye of the Beholder
| | Only In the Eye of the Beholderby angeroseblue
once i called myself
beautiful
until i realized that beauty
did not know my name
and i hardly recognized hers
stepped into my room
unclothed
nudist by nature
looking into a mirror
the only truth known to man
for unless distorted
never has it lied
stroking cheekbones, caressing
the neck
eyes staring truth
in pure form
No....
there is no such thing as
beauty
only flaws that we have
come to love
and others learn to
accept
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Re: Only In the Eye of the Beholder
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by DaGifted1 on Thursday, November 05, 2009 (09:52:00) |
This was a well written piece. My favorite line was "until i realized that beauty did not know my name and I hardly recognized hers" That was an excellent phrase of words
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Re: Only In the Eye of the Beholder
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by nerdgirl on Thursday, November 05, 2009 (10:47:31) |
I love this Libby, Its so true!
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Re: Only In the Eye of the Beholder
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by spence on Thursday, November 05, 2009 (10:49:59) |
This is wonderfully profound Libby- I absolutely love it, brilliant perspective, spence
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Re: Only In the Eye of the Beholder
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by questionajourney on Thursday, November 05, 2009 (17:49:15) |
you write with a purity and truth which just amazes me..q
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Re: Only In the Eye of the Beholder
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by Liquid_Chaos on Thursday, November 05, 2009 (19:20:51) |
Great description. I love the first stanza, very eye catching. L_C
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Re: Only In the Eye of the Beholder
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by thewholesoul on Thursday, November 05, 2009 (20:13:47) |
this really was a great piece libby. the first stanza sucked me right in and the rest of your reflection was a pleasure to read. best wishes, conor
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Re: Only In the Eye of the Beholder
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by badmalthus on Thursday, November 05, 2009 (23:20:57) |
Great write Libby.......love sees beauty......hate....LOL.
Cheers.......Harry
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Re: Only In the Eye of the Beholder
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by WordLover on Friday, November 06, 2009 (06:52:56) |
Oh, Libby, this is so good and so very true. First stanza especially immediately pulls you in and makes you read more.
Sandy
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Re: Only In the Eye of the Beholder
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by Zbird on Friday, November 06, 2009 (11:56:27) |
genius! an amazing work! good job on this!
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Re: Only In the Eye of the Beholder
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by Dreaming-Demon on Friday, November 06, 2009 (20:35:22) |
beautiful poem, i really like this alot, well done
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Re: Only In the Eye of the Beholder
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by danielouis on Wednesday, November 11, 2009 (23:52:36) |
self image is a factor that is questionable at best, but it has value to most. love thyself first. men have this problem to.
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Re: Only In the Eye of the Beholder
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by Temptress on Wednesday, November 18, 2009 (15:59:22) |
This is a wonderful and powerful poem . I recall a certain line in a movie called " Shallow Hal" that was : The brain see's what the heart wants it to feel and that still sticks with me because no matter what relationship you have , you tend to accept and love unconditionally even the biggest of flaws.
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