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Poems - Lola:Be Quiet and Let me read

Lola:Be Quiet and Let me read

by angeroseblue

Silence...
let me read his poems in
peace
do not utter his name
upon your breath
one....more....time

while i read his words
in fear that the strength
i once possessed is
being drained

she can not have the power again

as the words possess the other
half of me
that is weak and feeble
wanting to be let out of this cell

to resist you.....feeling as if i am
letting go of a piece of me
if i can't read you

even if it is
one
simple
kiss
of your pen's stroke

Lola,stop that.

they cling to the strings
that were once plucked
constantly
and still vibrate to your hum

like tasting destruction in its
harmless form

you want it
i want it

get out of my bed
stay out of my head
you are a stranger to my knowing
yet the touch of your pen
stokes bring back the
memories

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Re: Lola:Be Quiet and Let me read (Score: 1 )
by Disfrazada on Thursday, November 05, 2009 (10:46:38)

Wow Libby you have done it again. I could not stop reading this over and over again. A very captivating poem indeed my friend. Best wishes.

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Re: Lola:Be Quiet and Let me read (Score: 1 )
by angeroseblue on Thursday, November 05, 2009 (23:25:52)

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Re: Lola:Be Quiet and Let me read (Score: 1 )
by nerdgirl on Thursday, November 05, 2009 (10:51:32)

This is mesmerizing. I love when Lola interrupted. LOL
Youre so damn talented.

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Re: Lola:Be Quiet and Let me read (Score: 1 )
by angeroseblue on Thursday, November 05, 2009 (23:26:32)

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Re: Lola:Be Quiet and Let me read (Score: 1 )
by Glen on Thursday, November 05, 2009 (10:53:48)

anyone would read your poems over and over again you get better with each one great stuff

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Re: Lola:Be Quiet and Let me read (Score: 1 )
by angeroseblue on Thursday, November 05, 2009 (23:27:52)

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Re: Lola:Be Quiet and Let me read (Score: 1 )
by maryanns on Thursday, November 05, 2009 (16:12:27)

Yes, I know who Lola is and I believe she's taking over... or at least she has Libby on the run. Really good write, girl. Don't let her take over entirely, we enjoy Libby, too! Tee-hee, Have fun. Mary Ann

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Re: Lola:Be Quiet and Let me read (Score: 1 )
by angeroseblue on Thursday, November 05, 2009 (23:29:07)

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Re: Lola:Be Quiet and Let me read (Score: 1 )
by Khem on Thursday, November 05, 2009 (17:24:56)

The image of a stringed musical instrument is out of place in this poem, which is otherwise very strong.

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Re: Lola:Be Quiet and Let me read (Score: 1 )
by angeroseblue on Thursday, November 05, 2009 (23:31:22)

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Re: Lola:Be Quiet and Let me read (Score: 1 )
by questionajourney on Thursday, November 05, 2009 (17:46:03)

this is intriguing Libby...you went deep into the ink on this poem...impossible to not feel...q

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Re: Lola:Be Quiet and Let me read (Score: 1 )
by angeroseblue on Thursday, November 05, 2009 (23:32:14)

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Re: Lola:Be Quiet and Let me read (Score: 1 )
by thewholesoul on Thursday, November 05, 2009 (20:22:07)

three in a row you knocked out of the ball park !! once again - terrific write. best wishes, conor

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Re: Lola:Be Quiet and Let me read (Score: 1 )
by angeroseblue on Thursday, November 05, 2009 (23:33:14)

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Re: Lola:Be Quiet and Let me read (Score: 1 )
by Tiku on Thursday, November 05, 2009 (21:22:21)

a nice one.thanks for sharing.

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Re: Lola:Be Quiet and Let me read (Score: 1 )
by angeroseblue on Thursday, November 05, 2009 (23:34:02)

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Re: Lola:Be Quiet and Let me read (Score: 1 )
by rondo on Thursday, November 05, 2009 (23:23:49)

great poem young lady your altar ego makes a good muse.....you appeal to the male population of GP with the refrence to his pen an excellent move such a bright thing you are..........as much as I hate to agree with klem the string refrence seems missplaced thats why he low rated you a 5 but those that see the whole picture and falability of EVERYONE ! have prevailed at a just and deserving rate.......rondo

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Re: Lola:Be Quiet and Let me read (Score: 1 )
by angeroseblue on Thursday, November 05, 2009 (23:39:59)

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Re: Lola:Be Quiet and Let me read (Score: 1 )
by Zbird on Friday, November 06, 2009 (11:57:34)

another amazing poem!

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Re: Lola:Be Quiet and Let me read (Score: 1 )
by angeroseblue on Friday, November 06, 2009 (21:17:05)

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Re: Lola:Be Quiet and Let me read (Score: 1 )
by Dreaming-Demon on Friday, November 06, 2009 (23:12:38)

lol wow another excellent poem, nice

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Re: Lola:Be Quiet and Let me read (Score: 1 )
by angeroseblue on Saturday, November 07, 2009 (17:05:25)

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Re: Lola:Be Quiet and Let me read (Score: 1 )
by Jess147 on Sunday, November 08, 2009 (16:25:06)

Great stuff libby!

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Re: Lola:Be Quiet and Let me read (Score: 1 )
by angeroseblue on Monday, November 09, 2009 (07:17:58)

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