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Finished

by angeroseblue

so tired am i
hurting, midnight hurts the most
now I'm giving up




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Re: Finished (Score: 1 )
by nerdgirl on Saturday, November 07, 2009 (08:04:11)
What are you talking about??? Is Lola winning?
This is sad... NEVER GIVE UP!!!

    Re: Finished (Score: 1 )
    by angeroseblue on Saturday, November 07, 2009 (16:14:54)
    this was a very lonely moment
    no....not giving up
    just was a little lonely i guess

    Promise you this
    you will know if i do!!! Very Happy


Re: Finished (Score: 1 )
by Disfrazada on Saturday, November 07, 2009 (20:27:44)
Sad This is a little sad to read Libby Sad . Take care of yourself my dear friend.

    Re: Finished (Score: 1 )
    by angeroseblue on Saturday, November 07, 2009 (23:19:41)
    don't be sad Disfrazada
    i am taking care of myself
    at the time i was going through a little mad/angry/blah blah yuck state


Re: Finished (Score: 1 )
by questionajourney on Saturday, November 07, 2009 (23:58:48)
'midnight hurts'...i know..more tired than normal sleep can handle...it seems to late to reach out..but it never is...never....q

    Re: Finished (Score: 1 )
    by angeroseblue on Sunday, November 08, 2009 (00:01:25)
    midnight is .... Mad Mad Mad
    but i get these little moments
    so i write poetry instead of doing something i might regret in the morning
    and it is never to late
    thanks for reading


Re: Finished (Score: 1 )
by thewholesoul on Sunday, November 08, 2009 (11:39:15)
sad ku libby. well executed

    Re: Finished (Score: 1 )
    by angeroseblue on Monday, November 09, 2009 (07:37:58)
    thanks Conor
    a little bit of madness one night
    i am ok now!!!


Re: Finished (Score: 1 )
by Zbird on Monday, November 09, 2009 (09:32:50)
i love the part...midnight hurts the most. powerful line!

    Re: Finished (Score: 1 )
    by angeroseblue on Monday, November 09, 2009 (11:07:55)
    thank you Zbird
    it is a lonely place
    that midnight .....


Re: Finished (Score: 1 )
by Ridge on Tuesday, November 10, 2009 (10:54:09)
A strong and powerful description of loneliness at the loneness of moments – midnight. Love it!

    Re: Finished (Score: 1 )
    by angeroseblue on Tuesday, November 10, 2009 (10:55:17)
    well thank you Ridge
    and when you come to know it like i have ....it is much worse
    but i overcome


Re: Finished (Score: 1 )
by danielouis on Wednesday, November 11, 2009 (23:47:56)
you got me all emotional an sht.

    Re: Finished (Score: 1 )
    by angeroseblue on Thursday, November 12, 2009 (00:21:30)
    are you pulling my leg....jk
    it is when the pain starts for me
    just being honest in my poetry.....

    and sorry Sad Sad


Re: Finished (Score: 1 )
by spence on Wednesday, November 18, 2009 (04:57:56)
I know that feeling all too well. Always creeps up on me in the dark lonely hours and laves me in a fit of despair. A very poignant write, cheers, spence

    Re: Finished (Score: 1 )
    by angeroseblue on Wednesday, November 18, 2009 (06:58:21)
    thanks for reading spence
    why does it always have to be in the dark
    why not in the morning>>>



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