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Poems - Pedophile??? KILL HIM
| | Pedophile??? KILL HIMby nerdgirl
Tonight is the night
we take off the mask
Bring in the sacrifice
So we can slit his ass
Here is the knife
Who goes first
We all have a need
to quench our thirst
The agony, the pain
That was good, cut him again
Down the legs
left then right
Hes tied up; cant put up a fight
tabasco in the eyes
a rope strapped to his cock
as for weight to cause pain
we use a rock
He screams and cries
we have tears of joy
Cut his dick off
thats what he gets
for touching a little boy
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Re: Pedophile??? KILL HIM
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by Disfrazada on Friday, November 20, 2009 (23:55:56) |
The is awesome nerdgirl... love the rhyme scheme. Pedophiles deserve this and so much worse  . Take care my friend.
Disfrazada
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Re: Pedophile??? KILL HIM
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by Madyakka on Saturday, November 21, 2009 (01:39:55) |
I share the same opinion Jenna. Powerful write, how can we get this put into some sort of universal law?
Dave
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Re: Pedophile??? KILL HIM
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by Ridge on Saturday, November 21, 2009 (10:42:20) |
Angry and satisfying emotions with a hint of the macabre, which makes it tantalizing. Great write!!
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Re: Pedophile??? KILL HIM
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by thewholesoul on Saturday, November 21, 2009 (14:39:35) |
wow graphic and horrifying stuff.
very dark. but personally i would favor a more humane form of punishment - that said were my kid ever molested, i may have a different opinion on the matter.
best wishes,
conor
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Re: Pedophile??? KILL HIM
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by danielouis on Saturday, November 21, 2009 (15:05:15) |
Christ Nerdy you really put something in that poem, the imagery is so real great write Nerdy. re: castration declaration.
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Re: Pedophile??? KILL HIM
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by Dreaming-Demon on Saturday, November 21, 2009 (17:19:15) |
ya i agree with u on this...touching little kids is so fucked up i many ways..i dont know whats goin through ppls minds when they do shit like that
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Re: Pedophile??? KILL HIM
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by Ozymandias on Saturday, November 21, 2009 (17:59:02) |
I won't comment on this as a poem, or rate it, but I am horrified at the lynch-mob mentality it expresses. Do you realize that pedophiles are usually people who were abused and molested themselves as children? So, when this man's victim grows up through a life of misery and begins, because he is so estranged from normal love and happiness himself, to abuse children, will you advocate the same fate for him too?
What pedophiles, and many others, need, is compassion and understanding to help them overcome the unhappiness that leads them into this kind of behaviour. Your poem expresses the exact opposite of what is needed if we are to have any hope of making this world a better place.
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Re: Pedophile??? KILL HIM
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by spence on Monday, November 23, 2009 (07:36:39) |
This is a subject that many writers shy away from, so I'm glad to see that you have the courage to voice a strong opinion on it. When I was younger I advocated capital punishment for child molesters (and rapists), but being anti-government sort of made that a paradox. This is more of a contention for mob rule/vigilante-ism and to my mind the role of the state is to protect paedophiles from such acts of rough justice and of course that said vigilante's could be wrong in their judgements and kill an innocent person- same as arguments against capital punishment. The reality of these factors means that scum like this can molest a child and be guaranteed safe haven in protective custody, (with other sex offenders- great for setting up networks), and have their identities protected upon release. In my experience, as a youth and community worker, the social policy means that these 'people' are relocated to the poorest areas in any given nation and in one locality I worked there were at least six that lived near to a school in a 'deprived area'. Of one thing I'm certain- if paedophiles knew that the community would deal out justice they'd probably not do it in the first place and if they did they'd have to answer to the victims of their crime...not be safe behind bars and afforded police protection. If you get the chance check out a poem I wrote years back called 'contested justice' which is about this very subject. I'd be interested in your opinion after reading this, take care, spence
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