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The Victim

by wolfinwindow

Victim number six and no one knows its me
I'm so good at punishing naughty little girls
I wine them and I dine them then I have to see
I invite them home to see my beautiful pearls

I'm so good at punishing naughty little girls
they're so willing until I tie them to the bed
a very sharp knife comes out as this tale unfurls
and I cut them here and there before I make them dead

they're so willing until I tie them to the bed
they struggle, they plead, they don't want to die
"you did this to yourself," I'd said
"What on earth do you mean?" she cried

they struggle, they plead, they don;t want to die
"I am the avenger, you entice the men,
every time you pass one you give him the eye."
I slice her throat, she knows why by then

I am the avenger, you entice the men
I wine them and I dine them then I have to see
I slice her throat, she knows why by then
Victim number six and no one knows it's me





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Re: The Victim (Score: 1 )
by Zbird on Thursday, November 26, 2009 (22:11:13)
chilling!!!!! excellent poem!

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Re: The Victim (Score: 1 )
by Dreaming-Demon on Friday, November 27, 2009 (01:34:13)
Sick and I love it...lol Twisted Evil Twisted Evil

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Re: The Victim (Score: 1 )
by butterflyzrfree on Thursday, April 08, 2010 (17:54:56)
Interesting Pantoum-like style. did you make this style up?

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