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Gabrielle

by micsir

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Si jamais il y eu un ange - Gabriellle
C’était bel et bien elle
Si jamais il y eu un ange - Gabrielle
C’est elle

Son timbre solennel
Une candeur n’ayant pas de pareille
Les cheveux blonds aux travers desquels
Rayonnent le dieu-soleil

Ma foie! Il n’y manquait que les ailes
Serais-ce la cause de son ravissement - sa tourmente
Le sort en faisait que sans elle
La vie était dure, réelle - chancelante

Oui ! Moi sans elle !? Pas pareil
Les cieux peuvent me consacré à tout jamais
De me livrer à ma peine.
Celle qu’il a délivré, c’est la femme que j’aime

Des ailes je lui aurait donner les miennes
Je l’aurais tenu à l’écart des querelles
Maintenant si seulement elle m’appelle
Elle habite avec tel ou tel
Et je ne crois pas qu’elle ait un cell.


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If there ever was an angel - Gabrielle
It was well indeed herself
If there ever was an angel - Gabrielle
It’s her

Her solemn tone
A candor with none similar
Blonde hair through which
Radiates the sun-god

I’ll be! She lacked only wings
Would it be the cause of her rapture - her torment
Fate made it so that without her
Life was hard; real - wavering

Me without her!? Not the same
Heaven can consecrate me forever more
To my sentence/grief(peine)
She, who was granted deliverance, was my love

Wings - I would have given her my own
I would of held her away from harms way
Now if she would only call
She lives with so-and-so
And I don’t think she has a phone(cell)





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Re: Gabrielle (Score: 1 )
by mamta on Monday, January 04, 2010 (09:01:08)
a bit sad, but very lyrical

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    Re: Gabrielle (Score: 1 )
    by micsir on Tuesday, January 05, 2010 (02:10:27)
    i'll take happy or sad, over dark and mad any old day! Glad you stoped by. -mike

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      Re: Gabrielle (Score: 1 )
      by omegapaf on Thursday, January 14, 2010 (04:17:24)
      just gotta make my friend mamta blush here mike. if she was any cooler, she'd be a penguin ha ha.

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Re: Gabrielle (Score: 1 )
by maryanns on Monday, January 04, 2010 (20:06:25)
My gosh, your poem breaks my heart at the end, so beautiful and sincere. Oh, and thank you for including the translation or all would have been mostly a mystery to me...
Best wishes, Mary Ann

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    Re: Gabrielle (Score: 1 )
    by micsir on Monday, January 04, 2010 (23:38:49)
    Thank you, Mary Ann. - mike

    "I didn't mean to hurt you. I'm sorry that I made you cry.
    Oh well, I didn't want to hurt you. I'm just a jealous guy." - the Beatles

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Re: Gabrielle (Score: 1 )
by butterflyzrfree on Tuesday, January 05, 2010 (16:37:49)
Of course sounds better in my rusty French, but what can you do? Poetry sounds better in Spanish, maybe I'll try that...Great write...

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    Re: Gabrielle (Score: 1 )
    by micsir on Wednesday, January 06, 2010 (05:33:14)
    Latin dialects hold so many ways to rhyme. With so mant words finishing with vowels, they flow beautifully. I can just imagine spanish. I might want to look into that too. Merci d'être passé et merci surtout pour le beau commentaire BF. Wink

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      Re: Gabrielle (Score: 1 )
      by butterflyzrfree on Wednesday, January 06, 2010 (10:52:06)
      You are welcome! I can understand french, better than speak it, from lack of use! I used to speak it faily well. Now I speak spanish VERY well! Smile

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Re: Gabrielle (Score: 1 )
by BrokenWordsPoet on Wednesday, January 06, 2010 (13:35:38)
A beautiful write and style. BWP... James... Glad you posted in English...

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    Re: Gabrielle (Score: 1 )
    by micsir on Wednesday, January 06, 2010 (16:36:39)
    We can all thank mamta, me especially. She made me realize that it would be a good idea. Thanks for the kind words James.

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      Re: Gabrielle (Score: 1 )
      by BrokenWordsPoet on Wednesday, January 06, 2010 (17:41:05)
      mamta has also helped me greatly. As you can see from when I first started posting and now. It is great to have someone like her on the site. BWP... James...

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Re: Gabrielle (Score: 1 )
by omegapaf on Thursday, January 14, 2010 (04:03:22)
though my understanding of french is total merd. i did enjoy the french version. sometimes we have to give our wings away, to those who can't fly - well written mike - paul.

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    Re: Gabrielle (Score: 1 )
    by micsir on Thursday, January 14, 2010 (13:24:55)
    you summed it up beautifully. thanks paul

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