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Haiti-senru

by butterflyzrfree

Natural disaster
Requiring huge mass graves
Piles of the dead





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Re: Haiti-senru (Score: 1 )
by Zbird on Sunday, January 31, 2010 (10:41:40)
so sad...so true...so heartbreaking

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    Re: Haiti-senru (Score: 1 )
    by butterflyzrfree on Sunday, January 31, 2010 (10:54:10)
    Thanks, ZBird! I need a photo here, but not sure how to load it. Everyone has seen the photos on TV so parhaps not necessary...

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      Re: Haiti-senru (Score: 1 )
      by butterflyzrfree on Sunday, January 31, 2010 (10:57:04)
      I switched the lines. Would you mind if I asked your opinion on this take?

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        Re: Haiti-senru (Score: 1 )
        by Zbird on Tuesday, February 02, 2010 (17:24:55)
        this is such a graphic and powerful poem. this one is so good i don't even remember the first write, but know that i liked it as well...so either one works for me Smile.

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Re: Haiti-senru (Score: 1 )
by Beloved49 on Sunday, January 31, 2010 (10:58:01)
Oh, excellent. Ah less is best. Wonderful work although sad subject.

Melanie-b49

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    Re: Haiti-senru (Score: 1 )
    by butterflyzrfree on Sunday, January 31, 2010 (11:05:11)
    Thank you so much Melanie! Wlcome to GP-have not seen your name! Appreciate your comment! butterflyz

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      Re: Haiti-senru (Score: 1 )
      by Beloved49 on Sunday, January 31, 2010 (11:08:45)
      Thanks but I've been around for a while. I have written many poems, Ku is my favorite form.

      Melanie-b49

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        Re: Haiti-senru (Score: 1 )
        by butterflyzrfree on Sunday, January 31, 2010 (11:10:23)
        Oh, well then I am honored that you have taken the time to comment here! Smile

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          Re: Haiti-senru (Score: 1 )
          by Beloved49 on Sunday, January 31, 2010 (11:15:33)
          Please I am just like all or at least part of the wonderful poets on this sight.
          Stop by sometime.

          http://cassiopeiarises.blogspot.com

          Melanie-b49

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Re: Haiti-senru (Score: 1 )
by omegapaf on Sunday, January 31, 2010 (11:40:12)
when you actually know people who come from the earthquake zone it must make it a lot more personal - paul.

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    Re: Haiti-senru (Score: 1 )
    by butterflyzrfree on Sunday, January 31, 2010 (12:37:11)
    Du-oh! Just kidding, Paul, I was also experimenting with form though, working on polishing up my Japanese style poetry skills! In additions, of course it is very very sad. More when we talk...

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Re: Haiti-senru (Score: 1 )
by GlennMcCrary on Sunday, January 31, 2010 (15:42:44)
such a sad write I hope that they are helping them. Sad

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    Re: Haiti-senru (Score: 1 )
    by butterflyzrfree on Sunday, January 31, 2010 (17:01:02)
    US gov putting tons of military and probably every volunteer organization in the western word is there right now. also every west european country has sent and is sending aid, particulary France.
    Remember New Orleans is part of a COUNTRY. Horrible as that was, and still is in many respects, Haiti IS the country! Dominican Republic is also helping. but reluctant to take refugees. (Probably as this may result in half of the countries people coming over and many would want to stay) it is only a small island split in half, after all. About the size of Tennessee!

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Re: Haiti-senru (Score: 1 )
by WHMechem on Sunday, January 31, 2010 (23:37:54)
Gail,
It's another powerful image and fine haiku. You mentioned adding a picture. Check with mamta. She adds the photos for the "haiku eaters" forum and has helped me many times. -- Will

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    Re: Haiti-senru (Score: 1 )
    by butterflyzrfree on Monday, February 01, 2010 (07:52:53)
    Thanks so much, Will, both for the comment and read, and the helpful advice. I will definitely, contact Mamta sometime today. I appreciate you taking the time out for my Poetry.

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Re: Haiti-senru (Score: 1 )
by jhcamero on Tuesday, February 02, 2010 (14:28:03)
sad but so true

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    Re: Haiti-senru (Score: 1 )
    by butterflyzrfree on Tuesday, February 02, 2010 (17:56:15)
    Yes. Not much more to say. Sad

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