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Poems - muse

muse

by wordsmithwannabe

A muse I am not, she says,
And I beg to disagree.
For just this moment,
My beautiful girl,
YOU have inspired me.
I write of love,
I write of joy,
I write of tingling nerves.
I sing to you
A lullaby,
Of titilating verbs.
You may complain
And call me names,
But worth it all, this is.
For I am enamored with a rose,
A blue one.
This is bliss.

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Re: muse (Score: 1 )
by angeroseblue on Sunday, February 07, 2010 (02:40:13)

not gonna call you names at all
this is a beautiful poem
i enjoyed ... Very Happy

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by WordLover on Sunday, February 07, 2010 (09:55:35)

Really a beautiful love poem you have penned! Especially love your line about your "blue" rose!! Smile

Sandy

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by maryanns on Sunday, February 07, 2010 (14:31:52)

Beautiful, Chris... a blue rose it is, your poem gently sings for her.
Really enjoyed this lovely poem with delicate rhythm. Cheers, Mary Ann

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by Liquid_Chaos on Sunday, February 07, 2010 (21:52:53)

Very beautiful poem, much enjoyed reading.

L_C

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by nerdgirl on Monday, February 08, 2010 (08:18:31)

aaw.... blue rose...

This is lovely!

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by Disfrazada on Tuesday, February 09, 2010 (03:00:45)

My friend I see you are infatuated with the blue rose... she is something else isn't she? Nice poem!

DiSfRaZada

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by mspositive on Wednesday, February 10, 2010 (08:27:55)

I love it. Cute and sweet , I must say. The last lines are very catchy. Good job! Smile

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by micsir on Friday, February 12, 2010 (00:52:29)

"A lullaby of titalating verbs". Just beautiful.

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by butterflyzrfree on Saturday, February 13, 2010 (15:37:13)

So many comments, I will add that this could be a great lyric if you added a chorus. and I am so suprised that no one caught the other possible meanings of the blue rose...

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