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misfire

by ocuana

i rested the rustling rizla between my lips. Fired up a flame between my finger tips. Raised my right hand to re-ignite the ash. Misjudged; and lit up my moustach.





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Re: misfire (Score: 1 )
by maryanns on Saturday, February 20, 2010 (00:05:01)
Really enjoyed this - it's cute and it made me laugh. Of course I also had to look up Rizla... I'll admit I had no idea. Tee-hee, really good one. Very best wishes, Mary Ann (still chuckling)

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    Re: misfire (Score: 1 )
    by ocuana on Saturday, February 20, 2010 (09:46:54)
    After reading your awesome 'Shrooms; I felt obliged to remenisce of the psychadelic experience. I have a habit of using local brands/makes when writing. Keeps me cosey I think. Thanks for your comment M.A! Very Happy

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Re: misfire (Score: 1 )
by Leggolas on Monday, February 22, 2010 (07:12:51)
A fun piece ocuana, it made me laugh, always keep a fire extinguisher close at hand Wink LOL .Regards. Leggolas

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Re: misfire (Score: 1 )
by wordsmithwannabe on Monday, February 22, 2010 (23:41:17)
well i too, like Mary Ann, must confess that I had to look up "rizla", which makes the piece even funnier now that i know what it is!! guess i should've known by the tag line what a rizla would turn out to be... Very Happy Very Happy Laughing

chris

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