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Re: Perforations (Score: 1 )
by misty678 on Monday, April 19, 2010 (09:01:38)
Your poem is simply beautiful

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    Re: Perforations (Score: 1 )
    by silent_lotus on Monday, April 19, 2010 (17:52:32)
    dear Helen-Lee

    i am very touched by your enthusiasm
    for the words that flow through me

    i hope you are enjoying the
    blossoming of spring

    a warm smile
    silent

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Re: Perforations (Score: 1 )
by zhaul on Sunday, May 09, 2010 (22:18:23)
Very nice except for two things. the lack of punctuation and the use of Capital letters makes the reading confusing. There was little. That was new on. The way from... it doesn´t read right.

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    Re: Perforations (Score: 1 )
    by silent_lotus on Monday, May 10, 2010 (20:10:13)
    dear Zhaul

    i have great compassion for what you pose
    as the difficulties of the missing grammar
    and each line beginning with a Capital.

    yet some painters are abstract minimalists
    and other hyper realists.

    here the layout also refers to perforations
    and line breaks often also just call to pauses

    might i also invite you to take a look here
    http://www.poetrycircle.com/index.php/topic,17037.0.html

    i have many thankyuus for your pointing out such things
    and appreciate your kind and generous words.

    a warm smile
    silent lotus

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      Re: Perforations (Score: 1 )
      by zhaul on Saturday, May 15, 2010 (13:23:45)
      I have read a lot of poems from you, and I appreciate your style, but sometmes is a good idea to be more conservative, if you know what I mean, i admire your poetry.

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