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Poems - You Remind Me of A Lonnnggg Violin
I do; however, have a few nits. You may consider making the following changes:
The stale itchy sound [scratchy sound], because itchy doesn't make a sound, and stale, in fact, describes neither itchy nor scratchy. You may want to think about this.
To [Too] much for my own good
Repaint may be hyphenated. Not certain though.
With practice comes perfection. Keep writing!
Hope I've been somewhat helpful.
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