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Poems - Flying down a back road in my mother"s car

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Flying down a back road in my mother"s car

by york2frisco

fifty nine Fairlane
siblings in the back seat float
as it catches air





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Re: Flying down a back road in my mother"s car (Score: 1 )
by WHMechem on Friday, April 23, 2010 (23:21:55)
Sounds like a fragile moment on a trip into destiny - powerful visual.

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    Re: Flying down a back road in my mother"s car (Score: 1 )
    by york2frisco on Wednesday, April 28, 2010 (02:08:32)
    Thanks for reading... indeed, more fragile than my 16 year old mind cared to think about.

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Re: Flying down a back road in my mother"s car (Score: 1 )
by electrictiger on Tuesday, April 27, 2010 (23:26:21)
wonderful, and a touch surreal. just lovely.

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    Re: Flying down a back road in my mother"s car (Score: 1 )
    by york2frisco on Wednesday, April 28, 2010 (02:19:12)
    Thank you... that describes the experience to
    to a " T ". The fact that I lived long enough to
    smarten up I attribute to dumb luck.

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Re: Flying down a back road in my mother"s car (Score: 1 )
by wordsmithwannabe on Wednesday, April 28, 2010 (02:00:22)
reminds me of my youth. nicely done.

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    Re: Flying down a back road in my mother"s car (Score: 1 )
    by york2frisco on Wednesday, April 28, 2010 (02:22:23)
    Thanks ... glad you liked it.

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