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Strolling Along

by sschubert

Copyright ©2010 Stephanie R Schubert

Seduced into the darkness
Strolling along
Started out perfectly
Now it’s gone so wrong

The fall of the winter leaves
The fog in the darkness
Mysteries Weave

The softest breeze
So bitter cold
Tingling in my heart
As I grow old

A memory of loves plight
Loneliness
On this endless cold night

The rustling of dreams
Once gone by
Strolling softly along

Simply
As the days go by





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Re: Strolling Along (Score: 1 )
by strongman on Sunday, May 16, 2010 (10:39:02)
I felt a soft sadness as I read this, yet an edearing quality as well. A connection with the person who is strolling along.

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    Re: Strolling Along (Score: 1 )
    by sschubert on Sunday, May 16, 2010 (11:19:34)
    Embarassed Embarassed Embarassed

    THANKS Strongman! For the time and the read and the comment - it means sooo much to me!


    XOXOXO

    Steph Wink

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Re: Strolling Along (Score: 1 )
by unknownmover! on Sunday, May 16, 2010 (11:27:18)
great write..very deep..very well expressed

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    Re: Strolling Along (Score: 1 )
    by sschubert on Sunday, May 16, 2010 (12:59:11)
    Thanks nknownmover - so glad you left me a note! Have a GREAT day my friend!


    XOXOXO

    Steph Wink

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Re: Strolling Along (Score: 1 )
by WordLover on Sunday, May 16, 2010 (20:19:48)
Steph, this is a beautifully worded combination of sadness, melancholy, heartbreak, yet told with such a soft touch. Just lovely my friend.

Sandy

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    Re: Strolling Along (Score: 1 )
    by sschubert on Monday, May 17, 2010 (22:33:35)
    SANDY - as usual I am touched by your comments - thanks so much for reading my work - I hope all is well my friend.

    XOXOXO

    Steph Wink

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Re: Strolling Along (Score: 1 )
by Keeperofhope on Monday, May 17, 2010 (01:15:17)
Sad this is sad yet well written. you totally wrote this from you heart.
Nicely done
Jess

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    Re: Strolling Along (Score: 1 )
    by sschubert on Monday, May 17, 2010 (22:56:41)
    YEP better for my heart to be strolling along than skipping a beat! LOL!

    Good to see you Jess thanks for the time and the read!


    XOXOXO

    Steph

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Re: Strolling Along (Score: 1 )
by maryanns on Monday, May 17, 2010 (10:50:21)
Oh Steph... you've so beautifully written such familiar sensations. I read them gentle, fresh and new in your phrases. Bless your heart... I wish you summer sunshine's hope and renewal.
Hugs and smiles, Mary Ann

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    Re: Strolling Along (Score: 1 )
    by sschubert on Monday, May 17, 2010 (22:57:54)
    It would be nice if summer would get here already! LOL!

    HUGGS my friend and thanks for leaving me a note - I see you are in the number one slot - on my way to check it out!

    XOXOXO

    Steph Wink

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Re: Strolling Along (Score: 1 )
by jaimeluna on Wednesday, May 19, 2010 (19:55:40)
good write very interesting Very Happy

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