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Lightening Bolt a Horse

by wolfinwindow

The fastest horse alive he was
and Lightening Bolt his name.
From stand still to a gallop,
surging muscles were his fame.

It was the Civil war between the states,
when a horse was a soldier, too,
that he proved his name , became legend
and showed he was true blue.

Troop B was trapped and needed help,
one boy was spared and he was scared.
He laid on Lightening Bolt, becoming one,
as they race through unimpaired.

Through the deadly gauntlet,
to the fort at top speed.
They raced for miles unimpeded,
the boy and his trusty steed.

Arrows wafting, zinging past,
gunsmoke filled the very air,
but Lightening Bolt went faster still,
he and his rider, a wild ride did share.

They sped up as they neared the gate,
an extrordinary burst of speed he gave.
He was heaving,lathered and exhausted,
but the troop B, they were saved.

The cavalry gathered altogether
and circled and whooped the indian band.
While back at the fort, Lightening Bolt,
was being curried by a very greatful hand.





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Re: Lightening Bolt a Horse (Score: 1 )
by verse-atile on Wednesday, July 14, 2010 (02:02:23)
magnificent storytelling, I should like to have read something of an admonishment of lightning bolt for his bravery and courage by troop B at the end of the poem, rather than just being curried by a good hand.

still, the story was in wonderful verse, a fantastic effort.

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    Re: Lightening Bolt a Horse (Score: 1 )
    by wolfinwindow on Wednesday, July 14, 2010 (02:21:45)
    yea you're right, I didn't carry it far enough....lol Thanks for the nice comment.

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Re: Lightening Bolt a Horse (Score: 1 )
by variable58 on Wednesday, July 14, 2010 (02:27:15)
very exciting tale. Enjoyed. Very Happy

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Re: Lightening Bolt a Horse (Score: 1 )
by Zbird on Wednesday, July 14, 2010 (08:23:32)
excellent story poem! had my heart racing with the ride!

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Re: Lightening Bolt a Horse (Score: 1 )
by dreamdragon on Friday, July 16, 2010 (12:56:32)
great write kept my interest

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Re: Lightening Bolt a Horse (Score: 1 )
by PinkNeonFlavor on Saturday, July 17, 2010 (19:04:04)
Normally, I don't get into these cowboy poems. But this one was very exciting and kept my eyes fixated on the screen while I was reading it.

Good job Very Happy Very Happy

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Re: Lightening Bolt a Horse (Score: 1 )
by liarbird on Tuesday, July 20, 2010 (21:35:56)
G'day Linda...
A nice heroic ballad Linda rising from the tragedy of war.
Thank you Linda.
Lindsay

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