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Metaphorically Speaking

by unknownmover!

The day seen
What tomorrow brings
The night swings
like a tree leaf
The clock ticks
as if it had somewhere to be
The mind thinks
like the bird sings
The earth breaths
into our being
The moon dreams
on rising before the evening
The soul leaves
and takes with it the meaning
My mind needs
to be forgiving
Myself seeks
A better place to live in
This places reeks
Like a greedy prison
So I'll just sit
and wait for the reason
We all live
To love and go Fishing

Metaphorically Speaking




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Re: Metaphorically Speaking (Score: 1 )
by PinkNeonFlavor on Thursday, August 05, 2010 (20:25:04)
very good imagery and eloquent usage of metaphor!

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    Re: Metaphorically Speaking (Score: 1 )
    by unknownmover! on Thursday, August 05, 2010 (22:42:06)
    thank you my friend..your words are always good to read! Very Happy Very Happy Very Happy

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      Re: Metaphorically Speaking (Score: 1 )
      by PinkNeonFlavor on Thursday, August 05, 2010 (22:44:40)
      You are welcome! Wink
      I'm glad to make you smile
      smiles are great
      I love smiles
      it's good you're
      Very Happy smiling Wink

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        Re: Metaphorically Speaking (Score: 1 )
        by unknownmover! on Friday, August 06, 2010 (16:15:03)
        smiling means positivity,positivity means a good time, a good time means a good life,a good life means another good semester in the school of thought and so on and so forth but it all starts with a smile!lol

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Re: Metaphorically Speaking (Score: 1 )
by twistedmistress on Thursday, August 05, 2010 (23:42:20)
I agree with pink up there well
done
niki

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    Re: Metaphorically Speaking (Score: 1 )
    by unknownmover! on Friday, August 06, 2010 (16:07:52)
    thank you my friend..i'm glad you enjoyed it! Very Happy

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Re: Metaphorically Speaking (Score: 1 )
by Disfrazada on Friday, August 06, 2010 (10:40:25)
I love this my friend. You know what? You work always makes me think I am reading the poem of some great philosopher Wink

Be well my friend....
DiSfRaZada

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    Re: Metaphorically Speaking (Score: 1 )
    by unknownmover! on Friday, August 06, 2010 (16:08:50)
    aww that means so much my friend.....means a lot..thank you and may your day bloom as beautiful as your night! Very Happy

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Re: Metaphorically Speaking (Score: 1 )
by thewholesoul on Friday, August 06, 2010 (13:39:34)
a real pleasure to read my friend. some great lines in there.

best wishes
conor

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    Re: Metaphorically Speaking (Score: 1 )
    by unknownmover! on Friday, August 06, 2010 (16:09:46)
    thank you conor..glad you enjoyed it..hope all is good .my friend! Very Happy

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Re: Metaphorically Speaking (Score: 1 )
by jo.pree on Wednesday, August 18, 2010 (13:33:46)
Hi Jose,

Hope you are great my friend... Simply love reading your poems.. As always this one seems to be so philosophical and thought provoking.. Keep writing.. You rock..

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    Re: Metaphorically Speaking (Score: 1 )
    by unknownmover! on Wednesday, August 18, 2010 (16:38:14)
    that you my friend..it means a lot...hope all is well in your side of the world...be good and be wise! Very Happy

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