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Poems - Oblivion
| | Oblivionby jonniblaze
Oblivion
sailing
on a sunless sea
downward to
infinity
no stars above
to give me hope
or guide me to
an island shore
with every change of course I make
my destiny
remains unchanged...
No escape
from this wilderness
No running from this -
- emptiness...
...
take my hand
and come with me
far beyond
this stormy sea
rest your weary heart within
leave the world
behind my friend
you've heard me calling
for a long long time
just take my hand
and you will find...
...
so I turn my ship
into the wind
and face the truth
that I have seen
softly singing
she calls my name
with open arms
I release my pain
and as the sea
closes over me
my heart at last finds -
- serenity -
... Oblivion -
- a broken heart's best friend
take my hand
and come with me
far beyond
this stormy sea
rest your weary heart within
leave the world
behind my friend
you've heard me calling
for a long long time
just take my hand
and you will find...
... Oblivion -
- a broken heart's best friend
so I turn my ship
into the wind
embrace the heart of -
- Oblivion...
"Hello Friend"-
- she welcomes me within...
take my hand
and come with me
far beyond
this stormy sea
rest your weary heart within
leave the world
behind my friend
you've heard me calling
for a long long time
just take my hand
and you will find...
...Oblivion...
"i'll be your broken heart's -
- best friend..."
6/14/1999
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Re: Oblivion
(Score: 1 )
by misty678 on Monday, August 09, 2010 (17:03:14) |
Very beautiful write
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Re: Oblivion
(Score: 1 )
by jonniblaze on Monday, August 09, 2010 (18:47:49) |
thanks for the review misty - glad you like !!
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Re: Oblivion
(Score: 1 )
by twistedmistress on Monday, August 09, 2010 (21:31:55) |
I love this you have a way of pleasing
my artistic sences with both pics
and words....
<3s
niki-lita
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Re: Oblivion
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by jonniblaze on Friday, August 13, 2010 (09:30:57) |
thanks niki-lita - it's nice when someone appreciates your work and effort and will also take the time to let you know. you, dear heart - are da best.
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Re: Oblivion
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by Zbird on Friday, September 03, 2010 (12:07:27) |
lovely!
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