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Poems - The Lone Wolf

The Lone Wolf

by Daniel

A Snow Wolf that's very lonely
With no communication
For the Pack

Doesn't talk to them
Play with them
Hang out with them
Sleep or eat with them

Matter of fact
When it comes to feeding time
He just wait until the Pack finished
Their meal
Then he just go ahead and finished the leftovers

The good thing that he
Contribute the help
If the young wolves is in trouble

But still
He's not into the whole group thing
With the Pack

Not many wolves don't quite
Understand him
Except for one female wolf

She understand his lifestyle
His sense of thinking
And just him being different

Eventually
She hangs out with him
Walks with him
And sleeps with him

You can say that
She's very fond of
His intelligence and lifestyle
Maybe in Love with him

He might be alone
But he have one friend
To count on

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Re: The Lone Wolf (Score: 1 )
by moe9299 on Monday, August 16, 2010 (14:18:34)

Very good. I liked this poem. Many spelling errors, but good!

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Re: The Lone Wolf (Score: 1 )
by PinkNeonFlavor on Monday, August 16, 2010 (20:52:49)

This is a beautiful poem. I love the whole idea behind this piece. The "wolf" idea of love. The able to understand is the ability to mend the broken. Very Happy

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Re: The Lone Wolf (Score: 1 )
by thewholesoul on Tuesday, August 17, 2010 (12:55:53)

ah, clever write, using the wolf to portray your personal story. very nice indeed buddy

best wishes
conor

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Re: The Lone Wolf (Score: 1 )
by twistedmistress on Tuesday, August 17, 2010 (13:24:58)

yes my freind very clever
love it and the ending
too....
be well my friend
niki

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Re: The Lone Wolf (Score: 1 )
by raw on Wednesday, August 18, 2010 (06:47:38)

I agree a very clever write. Nicely done. You might want to correct some spelling

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Re: The Lone Wolf (Score: 1 )
by jean on Thursday, August 26, 2010 (20:50:02)

very creative,unique poem fun to read enjoyed it

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Re: The Lone Wolf (Score: 1 )
by wolfinwindow on Monday, August 30, 2010 (18:02:36)

very nice poem, Daniel. I liked it a lot.

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Re: The Lone Wolf (Score: 1 )
by BlackCouture on Tuesday, October 12, 2010 (13:50:20)

Very good tale of a regal loner. I had an image of a gorgeous wolf in my mind the whole time.

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