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Rocketship

by PinkNeonFlavor

Tonight smells
like fragrances
of the strings
upon your
near stars -
it sounds like
moons speaking
in tongues
of your
galactic,
salsa sea

You can be my
rocket ship
I'll be your
drizzling sugar
like a carnival
pixie stick
and a rainbow
slushy, or even
an edible smiley

I'll boost your
speedy dance -
so come up high
rocket in the fields
of ecstatic heats
I'll kiss your mark,
when you finally
take off

Come in the realm
a celestial heartbeat
of graceful flesh
will sting within
while you're afar

A kaleidoscope of
riveting dreams
mirrored in my vision
only in my sleep
will break dance
to the musical heat
of all those dazzling
bright, blue stars
when your entity
so far far away
is in my bloodstream

I'll touch-
palpate
sizzling energy.
move your art
enhance your euphoria
like a hot sizzling glass
of hot tea

If you will be
my one and only
rocket ship
in technicality
of sensuality
and romantic plays
of rhapsodic versatility





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Re: Rocketship (Score: 1 )
by Daniel on Friday, August 20, 2010 (10:55:28)
Awww
that's so sweet
Sam.

Especially,
"you can be
my rocket ship
I'll be your
drizzling sugar
like a carnival
pixie stick
and a rainbow
slushy, or even
an edible smiley

I'll boost your
speedy dance
Come up high
rocket in fields
of ecstatic heats
and I'll kiss your
mark, when you
finally take off"

Really enjoyed reading it.

Smile Smile Smile

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    Re: Rocketship (Score: 1 )
    by PinkNeonFlavor on Friday, August 20, 2010 (21:31:30)
    Thank you my friend. Very Happy Very Happy Very Happy Very Happy Very Happy Very Happy

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Re: Rocketship (Score: 1 )
by thewholesoul on Friday, August 20, 2010 (16:13:08)
awesome sammi! i love the energy in your writings. excellent stuff

best wishes
conor

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    Re: Rocketship (Score: 1 )
    by PinkNeonFlavor on Friday, August 20, 2010 (21:33:45)
    Thank you, I'm glad you enjoy. I wrote this at 2 o'clock in the morning a few hours before school. Thus I hardly had any sleep because I couldn't go to sleep to get up at 6. I finally went to bed at 4 and received two hours of sleep to get up at 6. The muse was getting to me as I should have gone to sleep for more sleep. Muse got to me since school started (three days ago) at the latest times where sleep is due Laughing


    Very Happy Very Happy Very Happy Very Happy

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Re: Rocketship (Score: 1 )
by rondo on Friday, August 20, 2010 (22:00:41)
A great rap Pinky ...I think your on to somthing here....flows beautifully ...I could close my eyes and see you on stage in some coffee shop and I wake snapping my fingers

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    Re: Rocketship (Score: 1 )
    by PinkNeonFlavor on Friday, August 20, 2010 (22:22:38)
    Thank you, my friend. I'm glad you enjoyed this piece. Wink

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Re: Rocketship (Score: 1 )
by questionajourney on Friday, August 20, 2010 (22:29:10)
yer good.very good.

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    Re: Rocketship (Score: 1 )
    by PinkNeonFlavor on Friday, August 20, 2010 (22:31:28)
    Thank you my friend. Very Happy Very Happy Very Happy Very Happy Very Happy

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Re: Rocketship (Score: 1 )
by astaniga on Saturday, August 21, 2010 (01:20:12)
wow i loved it
kind of like fast paced movie

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    Re: Rocketship (Score: 1 )
    by PinkNeonFlavor on Saturday, August 21, 2010 (01:21:00)
    Thank you, my friend. I'm glad. Very Happy Very Happy Very Happy

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Re: Rocketship (Score: 1 )
by legendthriller on Saturday, August 21, 2010 (06:42:41)
Just plain AWESOME! That's what I feel! Congrats! Smile

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    Re: Rocketship (Score: 1 )
    by PinkNeonFlavor on Saturday, August 21, 2010 (12:45:00)
    Thank you, my friend. Very Happy Very Happy Very Happy Very Happy Very Happy Very Happy Very Happy Very Happy Very Happy

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Re: Rocketship (Score: 1 )
by Woodster on Sunday, August 22, 2010 (11:11:25)
Lyric conversion springs to mind in this my friend a truely great write...We going to hear you on the radio? Smile...love it sammi..you never seem to lower yr standard of writing it forever raises higher n higher...Well done...Stay safe..Woods..

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    Re: Rocketship (Score: 1 )
    by PinkNeonFlavor on Tuesday, August 24, 2010 (18:37:00)
    Oh wow. I missed your comment. Thank you my friend. Wink Very Happy Very Happy stay well, pal.

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Re: Rocketship (Score: 1 )
by Ilan on Saturday, August 28, 2010 (18:52:12)
Inspiring

Great images

enjoyed

ilan

Smile)))!

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    Re: Rocketship (Score: 1 )
    by PinkNeonFlavor on Saturday, August 28, 2010 (18:56:52)
    You make everything better, Ilan. Very Happy Very Happy

    Do you have an audio of yourself..
    I wonder what you sound like Razz

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      Re: Rocketship (Score: 1 )
      by Ilan on Saturday, August 28, 2010 (19:01:11)
      I'll phone you one day !!!

      Deep husky voice Smile

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        Re: Rocketship (Score: 1 )
        by PinkNeonFlavor on Saturday, August 28, 2010 (19:04:04)
        Don't think that would be possible. Honestly, you should record your voice somehow. I'm curious! Laughing Laughing

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          Re: Rocketship (Score: 1 )
          by Ilan on Saturday, August 28, 2010 (19:09:44)
          I made a CD. Called peace and hope.

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            Re: Rocketship (Score: 1 )
            by PinkNeonFlavor on Saturday, August 28, 2010 (19:10:37)
            Cool. Rip it to your computer and send the mp3 file to me. Very Happy Very Happy Very Happy Very Happy Very Happy

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              Re: Rocketship (Score: 1 )
              by Ilan on Saturday, August 28, 2010 (19:13:04)
              I wouldn't know how!!

              I could post to Gotpoetry admin for
              forwarding on to you

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                Re: Rocketship (Score: 1 )
                by PinkNeonFlavor on Saturday, August 28, 2010 (19:17:13)
                It's easy...I could tell you how...but I guess you could do it the way you wish to. If you want to ask the admin then you can do this. C:

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                  Re: Rocketship (Score: 1 )
                  by Ilan on Saturday, August 28, 2010 (19:26:50)
                  Rushing to work. Speak later

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Re: Rocketship (Score: 1 )
by butterflyzrfree on Saturday, September 04, 2010 (10:22:26)
Great picture-poem great lyric, and would be a great poem to recite!

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