Goodnight Moon, Midnight Rune

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Your poem is so vivid and full of emotion, Stef....
the night takes over and every vulnerability is
entirely exposed. I'm sure many readers
will relate to your experiences.
Loved the positive, uplifting ending -
Best wishes, Mary Ann

I can relate to this very much
and could feel every word you said
well done...
peace
NIKI

Your so called poetry seems more like letters or just plain old words.Do you have to keep writing.Stop pleassssssse !!!!!!

Re: Goodnight Moon, Midnight Rune (Score: 1 ) by deadalchemist on Thursday, August 26, 2010 (18:34:57)

I'm so flattered. Apparently you hate my poetry and want me to stop but yet you keep coming back for more, and READ it no less! Do you have to keep posting anonymously? Too embarrassed to let me know who you are (lol as if I don't already know)? As long as you continue to cower behind your computer monitor, I will keep writing poetry that you do not like. If you got laid you wouldn't be wasting your time here. I look forward to your future comments with sincere interest.


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Re: Goodnight Moon, Midnight Rune (Score: 1 ) by omegapaf on Thursday, August 26, 2010 (22:57:39)

mr anonymous seems to be running out of steam. i think i know who it is too........what an arsehole.


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Re: Goodnight Moon, Midnight Rune (Score: 1 ) by twistedmistress on Thursday, August 26, 2010 (22:31:32)

dude if you can be an a hole show ya face


sorrys d.c loved the poem chica

i really hate peeps like that
laters


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Re: Goodnight Moon, Midnight Rune (Score: 1 ) by JPerry1980 on Friday, August 27, 2010 (12:39:38)

... And along comes Anon to post another asinine comment. No poem is complete without the necessary infraction of stupidity and ignorance presented by the shallow of the world.

j.p.


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you weave this maddening tale well..finishing with a hint of optimism worked well in my opinion...going through the motions and having enough left over to see the gift of a new day..good one..qaj

a sort of lullaby for insomniacs - an old sheep who can still just about jump over the moon. Bbhaaaaaaaa! love the line " but ponder upon the grass that spreads " - you know who.

beautiful write my friend..just a happening with an ending that makes you smile..good shit!!

As I was reading this, Stef, I was just thinking (with one of those sad but knowing grins): "Been there, done that, all too often". This reminds me of the old Biblical proverb: "And this too shall pass". No matter how difficult the situation or how harsh the pain, just remember that it will fade with time and the coming of a new dawn.

Of course, sometimes we feel like others just can't understand or grasp what we're going through -- even though you're not alone sometimes you feel like it. For me, I reach for the twelve pack of beer, for others they reach for JD and still others greater distractions. I'll be the first to admit that although I guess you could say I have a hefty beer-drinking issue going on (which I'm certain I'll have to one day confront) -- it's only a distraction from what is confronting us and not an answer. There is another morning, another day, just around the corner.

Be well, my friend.

j.p.

I love that feeling of mundaneness that you have captured in this poem Stef.......I can see Camus screaming about the absurd......Sisyphus rolling his rock.
Cheers.....Harry

Re: Goodnight Moon, Midnight Rune (Score: 1 ) by butterflyzrfree on Saturday, October 09, 2010 (00:35:11)

Harry, you really like Sysiphus@@@@


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A great Poem
to read.

Really enjoyed.



- Daniel

Many nights like this. Tonight is one of them. Nice write and title...

wow my friend, ive been here for the most part...an excellent write....felt your words