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Poems - Open minds lost in Translation

Open minds lost in Translation

by unknownmover!

Open minds lost in translation
keep on thinking but they don't know
We look for meaning in investigations
So we won't reap what we sow
If this body's but a place
like a cage with no escape
then I don't really know how can we truly grow
we need to leave this state of being
where life is light, soul and spirit
Where we can lose the eerie feeling
of not knowing whats not known
till then I'll just keep smiling
keep my soul awake from dieing
keep my light full of lightning
and sit back and watch my world unfold.[b]

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Re: Open minds lost in Translation (Score: 1 )
by maryanns on Wednesday, August 25, 2010 (10:34:11)

Ahhhh, your observations are always so vivid and satisfying to me -your verse makes sense in an often senseless world. Knowing and not knowing, an utterly deep subject well addressed.
Best wishes, Mary Ann

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Re: Open minds lost in Translation (Score: 1 )
by unknownmover! on Wednesday, August 25, 2010 (12:17:36)

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Re: Open minds lost in Translation (Score: 1 )
by Disfrazada on Wednesday, August 25, 2010 (13:32:25)

My friend, this is great. The wisdom in your writes are beyond compare.

Be well my friend....
DiSfRaZada

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Re: Open minds lost in Translation (Score: 1 )
by unknownmover! on Wednesday, August 25, 2010 (15:42:11)

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Re: Open minds lost in Translation (Score: 1 )
by twistedmistress on Wednesday, August 25, 2010 (23:14:32)

wow just wow and wow again
you get the A+ stamp and a well done
to boot
I love this you insperational poet you
be well
NIKI

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Re: Open minds lost in Translation (Score: 1 )
by unknownmover! on Thursday, August 26, 2010 (01:06:47)

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