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Lovely

by unknownmover!

The air in her breath
made my heart stay alive
The smell of her sweet
kept lust in my mind
the thoughts of her breast
Makes my tongue want to climb
The touch of her legs
Kept our souls up all night
The love that was left
was but lust that was blind
The beat in our chests
did not beat in a rhyme
so we went on our quest
and wished that in time
We could see our regrets
and our souls would collide

Lovely!




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Re: Lovely (Score: 1 )
by Ilan on Thursday, September 02, 2010 (07:48:26)
Lovely indeed, a great rythm and
momentum that is sexy sexy with a
story so common, great poem
ilan

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    Re: Lovely (Score: 1 )
    by unknownmover! on Thursday, September 02, 2010 (11:49:23)
    thank you my friend..im so glad you enjoyed it! Very Happy

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Re: Lovely (Score: 1 )
by PinkNeonFlavor on Thursday, September 02, 2010 (07:53:51)
Beautiful!!! Sensual, romantic poem!!! Very Happy Very Happy Very Happy

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    Re: Lovely (Score: 1 )
    by unknownmover! on Thursday, September 02, 2010 (11:50:00)
    thank you pink..your words are always pleasant! Very Happy

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Re: Lovely (Score: 1 )
by twistedmistress on Thursday, September 02, 2010 (17:31:33)
nothing but sexiness in between these line
loved this lovely read
NIKI

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    Re: Lovely (Score: 1 )
    by unknownmover! on Friday, September 03, 2010 (13:39:27)
    thank you my friend!!..im glad you enjoyed it!wink wink..haha Very Happy

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Re: Lovely (Score: 1 )
by Daniel on Friday, September 03, 2010 (12:04:37)
Well
your Poem is definitely
Lovely.

Especially,
"The air in her breath
made my heart stay alive
The smell of her sweet
kept lust in my mind."

Great Poem,
my friend.

Smile Smile

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    Re: Lovely (Score: 1 )
    by unknownmover! on Friday, September 03, 2010 (13:40:09)
    thank D i'm glad you enjoyed it...hope you have a beautiful today! Very Happy

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Re: Lovely (Score: 1 )
by Craigd741 on Friday, September 03, 2010 (13:55:07)
Great write, I particularly like the flow and the way momentum is built.

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    Re: Lovely (Score: 1 )
    by unknownmover! on Friday, September 03, 2010 (14:06:02)
    thank you my friend..i'm glad you enjoyed it!! Very Happy

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Re: Lovely (Score: 1 )
by blackdahlia on Monday, September 06, 2010 (06:04:53)
Lovely indeed, and so intriguing: is it two souls as one or ships passing in the night? Or are u playing both sides of the fence: a sort of sensual have your cake and eat it ?

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    Re: Lovely (Score: 1 )
    by unknownmover! on Tuesday, September 07, 2010 (01:07:10)
    two souls as one and the have my cake and eat it too!!it was a thought that made me write..haha thanks for stopping by my friend.hope your night shines bright!! Very Happy

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Re: Lovely (Score: 1 )
by jo.pree on Wednesday, September 08, 2010 (10:12:42)
Simply simply simply beautiful Jose.... I just lovevvvvveeeee this Smile

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    Re: Lovely (Score: 1 )
    by unknownmover! on Wednesday, September 08, 2010 (20:34:03)
    thank you my friend..i'm glad to see you around! Very Happy

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