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Poems - haiku (oh...)

haiku (oh...)

by york2frisco

under the doormat
tattered and yellowed by time
the apology

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Re: haiku (oh...) (Score: 1 )
by induce on Monday, September 06, 2010 (21:24:14)

york, i enjoyed your use of time, scale and viewpoint
induce

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Re: haiku (oh...) (Score: 1 )
by york2frisco on Monday, September 06, 2010 (23:09:26)

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Re: haiku (oh...) (Score: 1 )
by Ozymandias on Monday, September 06, 2010 (23:27:14)

Induce said it well. I agree.

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Re: haiku (oh...) (Score: 1 )
by york2frisco on Wednesday, September 08, 2010 (02:47:21)

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Re: haiku (oh...) (Score: 1 )
by fogglethorpe on Tuesday, September 07, 2010 (23:37:26)

This is actually a senryu..but no matter. It's great. The goal of this form is to say volumes, both explicitly and (most important) implicitly. You have pulled it off brilliantly. A very rare ten from me and a fave too. Best..-H

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Re: haiku (oh...) (Score: 1 )
by york2frisco on Wednesday, September 08, 2010 (03:09:03)

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Re: haiku (oh...) (Score: 1 )
by Pujakins on Saturday, November 20, 2010 (19:08:52)

This was more easily accessed and I liked it a lot. Warm Wishes, Tasha

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