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Poems - A Wholesome Guy

A Wholesome Guy

by vexations

Each night she pretends
a wholesome guy
will shuffle alongside
on the sidewalk and
gently bump her shoulder.

Wholesome guy’s are
good in the morning
like high-fiber granola,
and easy on the eyes
with rumpled curls
resting against
eyes void of blood lines.

A wholesome fellow
knows what he wants −
her.

Her wholesome guy’s
adorned with blue denim
and passion spilling from
his crotch.

Her wholesome lover
lights candles on her birthday;
burns his way into her heart.

As they grow old together
she becomes his memory
while his memories are sprinkled
with pictures
of her beauty.

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Re: A Wholesome Guy (Score: 1 )
by sodapopsmash on Saturday, September 11, 2010 (16:26:14)

the type of poem I wish I could write:) love it.

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Re: A Wholesome Guy (Score: 1 )
by vexations on Saturday, September 11, 2010 (18:35:21)

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Re: A Wholesome Guy (Score: 1 )
by poetess41 on Saturday, September 11, 2010 (16:31:48)

I may not know a lot about a lot of things but I know what I love in a poem..I LOVE this one..*smiles*

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Re: A Wholesome Guy (Score: 1 )
by vexations on Saturday, September 11, 2010 (18:36:15)

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Re: A Wholesome Guy (Score: 1 )
by flagirl:) on Saturday, September 11, 2010 (17:06:17)

vexations that was funny but there are good guys out there somewhere.. I thought it was cute the way you worded it take care Smile

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Re: A Wholesome Guy (Score: 1 )
by vexations on Saturday, September 11, 2010 (18:37:18)

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Re: A Wholesome Guy (Score: 1 )
by Bercilak on Saturday, September 11, 2010 (17:37:29)

Wow- that is excellent. The last verse blew me away. Profound, true and familiar. Thanks for this.

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Re: A Wholesome Guy (Score: 1 )
by vexations on Saturday, September 11, 2010 (18:38:28)

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Re: A Wholesome Guy (Score: 1 )
by induce on Saturday, September 11, 2010 (23:03:47)

vexations, a very comfortable read...... well thought
induce

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Re: A Wholesome Guy (Score: 1 )
by vexations on Saturday, September 11, 2010 (23:24:23)

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Re: A Wholesome Guy (Score: 1 )
by maryanns on Sunday, September 12, 2010 (22:20:49)

I really enjoyed your Wholesome Guy - Each verse has such a visual perspective; some have quite memorable zingers, as well. From beginning to end, truly a great read. Best wishes, Mary Ann

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Re: A Wholesome Guy (Score: 1 )
by vexations on Monday, September 13, 2010 (08:16:52)

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Re: A Wholesome Guy (Score: 1 )
by loisseau on Wednesday, October 20, 2010 (13:55:30)

If wishes were horses, beggars would ride. A self- centered ironic wish for an ideal the women in this piece wishes for but probably won't get, for she won't settle for less. Provocative, well written piece.

L.

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Re: A Wholesome Guy (Score: 1 )
by vexations on Wednesday, October 20, 2010 (18:10:55)

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