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You

by rondo

You
(seven day supply)
----------------------------(Tear Here)-----------------------
The intensity of my focus and bearing
Depends on what it is your wearing
I’m disinterested if your not for it
If it meets your favor I adore it
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I find my rest against your breast
My I.V. drips from your lips
My favorite view is the sight of you
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You’re the air I breath
And the clothes I wear
I search my soul and find you there
Gasping and naked
When your not around
Lost without you and within you I’m found
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Even when I’m far from home
The thought of you warms my bones
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My mentor ,My buddy ,
My lover ,My muse.
Joined at the hip
And inexplicably fused
When life gets me down
And I’m feeling abused
You recycle my thoughts
To restore and renew
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Nothing can hold me when your on my side
I tackle life boldly and face it with pride
When in over my head its you that unearths it
And what makes this life struggle worth it
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My pleasure, my treasure
When with you I’m sync
Your devotion gives value
And love gives me strength
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rondo




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Re: You (Score: 1 )
by PinkNeonFlavor on Monday, October 18, 2010 (23:05:51)
The ecstasy and compassion of love. I loved this a lot...it speaks with good rhythm and rhyme. Nice work, Rondo.

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    Re: You (Score: 1 )
    by rondo on Monday, October 18, 2010 (23:39:54)
    thanks pinkster Very Happy

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Re: You (Score: 1 )
by flagirl:) on Tuesday, October 19, 2010 (10:09:45)
Rondo that was really good I like the muse part keep up the great writing Smile take care

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    Re: You (Score: 1 )
    by rondo on Tuesday, October 19, 2010 (17:34:38)
    thanks FG peace

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Re: You (Score: 1 )
by unknownmover! on Tuesday, October 19, 2010 (16:03:14)
deep write my friend..very good !

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    Re: You (Score: 1 )
    by rondo on Wednesday, October 20, 2010 (01:10:46)
    thx UKM Very Happy

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Re: You (Score: 1 )
by WordLover on Tuesday, October 19, 2010 (19:52:42)
oh rondo, I absolutely love everything you write, but you are the "king" of the romance writes! This one ..........wow.........went straight to the heart.

Sandy

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    Re: You (Score: 1 )
    by rondo on Wednesday, October 20, 2010 (01:10:02)
    its always exciting to get acknowledged by poets who know ... by WordLovers .Very Happy ...thx Sandy

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Re: You (Score: 1 )
by poetess41 on Wednesday, October 20, 2010 (07:20:41)
How deliciously beautiful is this? Sighsss..*smiles*

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    Re: You (Score: 1 )
    by rondo on Wednesday, October 20, 2010 (10:05:59)
    I have never known a person male or female who didnt enjoy a stroke of ego periodically Very Happy ...peace

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Re: You (Score: 1 )
by angeroseblue on Wednesday, October 20, 2010 (09:28:42)
Is this for me ...you shouldn't have Laughing Laughing Laughing

Rondo this is beautiful as .....well beautiful

lucky lucky lucky woman ..... Wink

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    Re: You (Score: 1 )
    by rondo on Wednesday, October 20, 2010 (10:11:10)
    of course! .... Rolling Eyes ....thx Libbster Very Happy

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Re: You (Score: 1 )
by oSoLovely1986 on Wednesday, October 20, 2010 (20:48:10)
I find my rest against your breast
My I.V. drips from your lips
My favorite view is the sight of you

omg rondo i completly LOVED this! it took me to a whole nother world. this is absolutely amazing. a fave of course!
<3Always
Angela<3

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    Re: You (Score: 1 )
    by rondo on Thursday, October 21, 2010 (14:18:24)
    we all just want to be appreciated....Thanks Angela Very Happy

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      Re: You (Score: 1 )
      by oSoLovely1986 on Thursday, October 21, 2010 (14:35:14)
      anytime! anytime Smile lol

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Re: You (Score: 1 )
by JPerry1980 on Friday, October 22, 2010 (23:10:15)
A great love poem to add to the growing swell of them -- but there's always room for at least one more when it truly expresses the heart and grants from the soul. Well done, Ron, a work of the graceful calling of love.

j.p.

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Re: You (Score: 1 )
by Candyass on Tuesday, October 26, 2010 (17:04:21)
awww I love this, its soo sweet. very good write I enjoyed this very much. Its a favorite Smile

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    Re: You (Score: 1 )
    by rondo on Tuesday, October 26, 2010 (17:26:29)
    thanks Candy nice of you to comment...peace

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Re: You (Score: 1 )
by kaia on Wednesday, October 27, 2010 (10:52:35)
NICE !!!

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    Re: You (Score: 1 )
    by rondo on Wednesday, October 27, 2010 (22:04:26)
    thanks welcome to GP Very Happy

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Re: You (Score: 1 )
by JoAn on Monday, November 01, 2010 (20:09:56)
Aseven day supply of beautifully romantic poems.
Very nice Rondo. I going to tear at the stipulated lines and paste on my 7 day calendar. Wink Good write my friend.

~~JoAn

Very Happy smiles are caontagious Very Happy

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    Re: You (Score: 1 )
    by rondo on Monday, November 01, 2010 (21:29:10)
    Thx joAn for the poetess it is intended...you all have done the same for me Very Happy

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      Re: You (Score: 1 )
      by JoAn on Monday, November 01, 2010 (22:12:16)
      Rondo-What a lucky lady she is to have such sweetness written for her.
      I hope that she is aware for whom the 7 day supply is especially intended. Very Happy

      Derrrr.........I wouldn't take any tear strips that were intended for a specific lucky lady. Being a newbie...I have a lot to learn about picking up on these things. oops

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        Re: You (Score: 1 )
        by rondo on Monday, November 01, 2010 (22:36:36)
        :oops:my passion for the poetess is polygamous whom ever she might be Shocked Very Happy peace

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