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The Way I Feel

by Candyass

The way I feel is worthless, I feel like a piece of shit.
You make me feel like the only thing I'm good for is sex.
You say you don't feel the same,
And you don't want to work things out.
But when your dick is hard
You want me then without a doubt.
I hate the way I feel inside
Because I still love you,
And no matter how much you beat me up inside,
I still try to be with you.
I'm sick of the way your treating me
And making me feel inside,
I can't take it anymore,
I just want to die.
I wish you would realize what your doing to me
It's just not fair,
This isn't how a man should treat his Wifey!


Candace W.
( written 2008 )





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Re: The Way I Feel (Score: 1 )
by Daniel on Thursday, October 28, 2010 (00:22:40)
A very strong Poem
you wrote Candy.

When I read it,
it shows both sad
and anger.

Sad that you Love
him so deeply, but angry that
he hurts you inside.

Sad Sad Sad Sad Sad Sad Sad Sad

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    Re: The Way I Feel (Score: 1 )
    by Candyass on Thursday, October 28, 2010 (09:55:50)
    Yes that was a very tough time for us. But we got through it and He is not like that now Smile dont get me wrong my husband is a very loving and caring person and I'm his baby Smile he takes great care of us. sometimes different people come out of us when we are going through bad or hard times and its the only way we know how to deal well some of us Smile
    Thank you for your comment always appreciated Very Happy

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Re: The Way I Feel (Score: 1 )
by Temptress on Thursday, October 28, 2010 (14:17:18)
Best place to vent is here on GP you will always find some comfort and support. I call these man bashing poems and have written a few myself and know just where your coming from sister.

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Re: The Way I Feel (Score: 1 )
by Zbird on Monday, November 22, 2010 (16:46:10)
amen to that! that is not the way a man should treat his wife!

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    Re: The Way I Feel (Score: 1 )
    by Candyass on Monday, November 22, 2010 (16:58:33)
    Thank you for your comment.
    And for the record he straightened up his act Laughing
    I dont just take it anymore either lol Wink

    love n happiness
    Candace Wink

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