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Trapped in a Dream!

by unknownmover!

I seen the wind rise
above my soul
I killed a dead ghost
who was looking for home
I inhaled in the stars
and breathed in the moon
Then jumped from this realm
into the unknown
I seen the truth
that lives in our souls
it spoke about death
and where we all go
It told me we are
but souls in a fog
tested to live
in this land that we breath
tested to be
positive beings
trapped in our Dreams!





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Re: Trapped in a Dream! (Score: 1 )
by poetess41 on Tuesday, November 16, 2010 (02:34:22)
Very deep and thought provoking poem-I enjoyed this so much...*smiles*

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    Re: Trapped in a Dream! (Score: 1 )
    by unknownmover! on Tuesday, November 16, 2010 (04:30:59)
    by making you think this write was worth writing!Smile

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Re: Trapped in a Dream! (Score: 1 )
by raw on Wednesday, November 17, 2010 (09:43:20)
Deep write. Perhaps it is when we wake from that dream we live??

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    Re: Trapped in a Dream! (Score: 1 )
    by unknownmover! on Wednesday, November 17, 2010 (16:40:57)
    yeah imagine that..if our real live we live while we are asleep in this one..makes on think!

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Re: Trapped in a Dream! (Score: 1 )
by badmalthus on Saturday, November 20, 2010 (02:37:14)
And the dream(s) continue...great write Jose.
Cheers...Harry

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    Re: Trapped in a Dream! (Score: 1 )
    by unknownmover! on Saturday, November 20, 2010 (17:58:28)
    thank you my friend i'm glad you enjoyed it.

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