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Anon Entity

by spence

In a dark, dark room
In a dark, dark house
A sad and lonely wanker
Is scrolling with his mouse

He’s looking for a victim
Some person he can smite
Someone to keep him company
This dark, dark night

He’s a bitter twisted bastard
He has not a single friend
And when he wants attention
He’ll antagonise again

He logs on blogs to instigate
And irritate us all
No life, no job he spills his wad
While watching online porn

He’s a parasite, a termite
That gets beneath your skin
He creeps and crawls amongst us all
As he looks for a way in

You see him everywhere you go
On every blog and site
He’s like an omnipresent foe
That sits alone all day and night

He’ll infiltrate the webpage
In between his role play games
To jeopardise and sabotage
‘Please notice me,’ he craves

He makes some people angry
Drives others half insane
But you shouldn’t let him get to you
He’s really quite mundane

He’d like to think he’s clever
Some wit- a great opponent
But the limp dick prick is mentally sick
Unimportant and impotent

A lost and lonely entity
Whose only form of self-expression
Is to imitate the lives of those
He hates in his depression

He hijacks thoughts that aren’t his own
Intervenes to feel important
Maybe we should pity him
As without us he’d be dormant

Perhaps he was abandoned
Or neglected as a child
So dare not come out of his room
Let alone go walk outside

That’s why he comes to see us
In his very special way
Just a shy little boy with his favourite toy
He’s hoping that we’ll play.

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Re: Anon Entity (Score: 1 )
by dav.smith on Friday, December 03, 2010 (23:52:05)
Great piece of work my friend. Sadly there is a 99.99% chance that he exists out there. You kept me in the read from start to end. Not a flat spot did I read. Great job,dAVE

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    Re: Anon Entity (Score: 1 )
    by spence on Saturday, December 04, 2010 (00:01:40)
    Cheers Dave- I was inspired by one of those anonymous rater people and antagonists from just about every public forum website and blog I have ever used! I think it must be the same people who send trojan horse viruses everywhere and like a virus they're everywhere- thought I'd have a laugh at their expense, thanks again mate, spence

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Re: Anon Entity (Score: 1 )
by BrokenWordsPoet on Saturday, December 04, 2010 (13:11:18)
I had just signed out and saw the title, and I had to read not knowing who posted. I dubbed the name silent raters before I really knew what was going on. It is really blind rating under a special link where members can go and rate with anonymity in order to get karma points.

John has kicked the person to the curb. I guess he karmaed his/herself right into the dark waters of the internet where they came from. But as long as we have blind ratings someone will take his place and when it happen someone needs to point a finger or call attention to what is going on if the problem is not being taken care of.

Thanks Spence for your comments. One of the things you said in your comment, was that you stopped donating. I think that part of your comment should be scary to John more than any other comment. I don't know if you read JoAnn's comment it should be just as scary.

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Re: Anon Entity (Score: 1 )
by badmalthus on Friday, December 10, 2010 (22:40:21)
TOUCHE! Excellent vent Spence.

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Re: Anon Entity (Score: 1 )
by omegapaf on Monday, December 27, 2010 (09:17:56)
spot on lee.
i used to rise to the bait of the annonymous rater
and bite like a chubby alligator
now i just say, see you in a while crocodile
glad you don't like my style.
- paul.

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Re: Anon Entity (Score: 1 )
by butterflyzrfree on Monday, January 10, 2011 (20:16:12)
Great write. You wrote with complete control of your topic. What a creep! too many of those around! I like what you wrote without being too explicit. Nice....

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Re: Anon Entity (Score: 1 )
by FuchsiaFestival! on Saturday, June 04, 2011 (21:21:57)
You know--sometimes there are just some entities out there who are adroitly unperceptive and like to use and harm other people--and infiltrate the pages---yet the humor it kind whirls around this piece.......

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