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Poems - Buried Alive

Buried Alive

by swanking

In the dark her hands reached out
no one heard her as she cried
the cold dark earth surrounded her
buried alive she screamed 'til she died.

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Re: Buried Alive (Score: 1 )
by astaniga on Tuesday, January 04, 2011 (12:24:20)

wow this was really dark
and gave me chills

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Re: Buried Alive (Score: 1 )
by Keifer on Tuesday, January 04, 2011 (12:26:19)

holy cow! creepy!

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Re: Buried Alive (Score: 1 )
by variable58 on Tuesday, January 04, 2011 (15:56:33)

harsh reality...gave me a cold feeling

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Re: Buried Alive (Score: 1 )
by butterflyzrfree on Wednesday, January 05, 2011 (09:53:08)

Could leave out 'she' from the final line. Again you suprise and impress me with your mini-dramas-mysteries!

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Re: Buried Alive (Score: 1 )
by darlingdiva on Thursday, January 06, 2011 (14:35:25)

okay, this one is really really scary!

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