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Poems - Out of Place (Erasure Poetry)

Out of Place (Erasure Poetry)

by astaniga

out of place
disconnected

things to do
lost

words give up
uneasiness inside

break free
soar up

yell and shout
not going to help

what do you do
what’s wrong?

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Original Poem called Out of place is also written by me
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Erasure poetry is a form of Found poetry created by erasing words from an existing text in prose or verse and framing the result on the page as a poem. The results can be allowed to stand in situ or they can be arranged into lines and/or stanzas.

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Re: Out of Place (Erasure Poetry) (Score: 1 )
by Liner on Wednesday, January 05, 2011 (13:31:07)

I've never seen "erasure" poetry, I looked up erasure poetry and I like it....not saying I'd rush to do, but a great way for others to sit and pencil in their own interpretation (is that the idea, or more so to read it for what it is)?

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Re: Out of Place (Erasure Poetry) (Score: 1 )
by astaniga on Thursday, January 06, 2011 (01:04:49)

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Re: Out of Place (Erasure Poetry) (Score: 1 )
by JoAn on Wednesday, January 05, 2011 (20:19:30)

An interesting concept, Karishma. Challenging ~~~JoAn

Very Happy

smiles are contagious...catch one and pass it on Very Happy

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Re: Out of Place (Erasure Poetry) (Score: 1 )
by astaniga on Thursday, January 06, 2011 (01:05:42)

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Re: Out of Place (Erasure Poetry) (Score: 1 )
by Dreaming-Demon on Thursday, January 06, 2011 (16:58:11)

I like this style, well done my friend

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Re: Out of Place (Erasure Poetry) (Score: 1 )
by astaniga on Friday, January 07, 2011 (12:15:05)

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