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Candlelight..

by vayenness

Candlelight..

Candlelight..
An ant,a pen
And a rain in the night,
Bound with delight
An art,In a den
to the highest flight...
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Re: Candlelight.. (Score: 1 )
by Liner on Sunday, January 09, 2011 (06:38:38)
vayenness, I kind of get it down to the last line, what is this line symbolising, is it you, the ant, escaping the den?

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    Re: Candlelight.. (Score: 1 )
    by vayenness on Thursday, January 20, 2011 (23:54:32)
    ..Actually.it refers to anyone who feel so small about themselves, cuz they're forsaken. But then again,a those things cud inspire u..like me it inspires me to write..

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      Re: Candlelight.. (Score: 1 )
      by Liner on Friday, January 21, 2011 (04:14:05)
      Ok, then I'm glad I felt what you were conveying, keep it up. Liner

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Re: Candlelight.. (Score: 1 )
by Darkdreams on Sunday, January 09, 2011 (07:34:06)
I gave you 5... its short but is missing many part... warm whisper

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    Re: Candlelight.. (Score: 1 )
    by vayenness on Thursday, January 20, 2011 (23:45:38)
    ..ok.thnx 4 the commnt anyway..I've been writing a lot of poems..i have to say that i'm sensitive enough to consider myself as a poet,on the other hand, i admit that my english is not so flawless..
    I'll appreciate it if u leave comments evrytime i post..u know to improve myself..thnx..

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Re: Candlelight.. (Score: 1 )
by induce on Sunday, January 09, 2011 (10:03:48)
vayenness, you have supplied a good picture here, it is rich in a good way, very textural and strong.

induce

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    Re: Candlelight.. (Score: 1 )
    by vayenness on Thursday, January 20, 2011 (23:47:05)
    ..thank you! pls. leave commnt evrytime i post..need to improve my writings.

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