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Poems - Falling Away

Falling Away

by astaniga

Deep in her purple eyes
Hides the feelings she can’t describe
Each dawn with new hopes she wakes
Hopes to turn around her fate
She knows she is losing the battle inside
Growing weak with each dusk
The voices that she hears
The screams of past life
Penetrate through her dreams
She’s living life worse than her nightmare
Dark bags beneath her empty eyes
Tell the tale she denies
Crawling through each page
She reaches a bridge
Taking deep breathe and arms apart
She takes the fall with peace inside

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Re: Falling Away (Score: 1 )
by misty678 on Monday, January 24, 2011 (11:52:06)

Beautiful write

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Re: Falling Away (Score: 1 )
by astaniga on Tuesday, January 25, 2011 (12:29:19)

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Re: Falling Away (Score: 1 )
by JoAn on Monday, January 24, 2011 (17:40:43)

Beutiful write of a sad subject, Karishma. Smile

s ~~~Joan

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Re: Falling Away (Score: 1 )
by astaniga on Tuesday, January 25, 2011 (12:35:17)

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Re: Falling Away (Score: 1 )
by astaniga on Tuesday, January 25, 2011 (12:35:28)

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Re: Falling Away (Score: 1 )
by Ilan on Tuesday, January 25, 2011 (18:10:28)

Liked very much my friend

Kind rgs
ilan

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Re: Falling Away (Score: 1 )
by astaniga on Friday, January 28, 2011 (12:31:17)

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Re: Falling Away (Score: 1 )
by Deathwish on Wednesday, January 26, 2011 (11:26:47)

I love your write... especially if I were a bird... 10

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Re: Falling Away (Score: 1 )
by astaniga on Friday, January 28, 2011 (12:30:15)

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Re: Falling Away (Score: 1 )
by Veils_Mistress on Wednesday, January 26, 2011 (20:04:59)

This was great. Tragic and well expressed Smile

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Re: Falling Away (Score: 1 )
by astaniga on Friday, January 28, 2011 (12:31:41)

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Re: Falling Away (Score: 1 )
by Daniel on Sunday, January 30, 2011 (13:11:18)

Haven't read your
Beautiful Poetry in a
long minute. Even though
your Poem is Dark and
seemed very sad,
I still enjoyed it anyway.

Smile

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Re: Falling Away (Score: 1 )
by astaniga on Wednesday, February 02, 2011 (13:27:51)

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Re: Falling Away (Score: 1 )
by bigbadwolf on Monday, May 02, 2011 (05:57:38)

A lovely but yet sad write all in one.

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Re: Falling Away (Score: 1 )
by astaniga on Wednesday, June 08, 2011 (11:35:13)

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