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What I can

by philosopherofl

The steel rose
For all the ones I can't give
Lacking color, Lacking life
But it's what I can
What I can

The unvoiced song
For the words I can't say
Trying rain, Trying sunrise
But it's what I can
What I can

The discrete touch
For the kisses and caresses I can't give
Skimming brisk, Skimming soft
But it's what I can
What I can

The perfect dream
For the reality I can't have
Feeling you, Feeling love
But it's what I can
What I can





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Simple in form yet p (Score: 1 )
by tekirdag on Thursday, May 03, 2007 (04:27:23)
Simple in form yet powerful.

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arrrrrrgh, you're ma (Score: 1 )
by b_frank on Thursday, May 10, 2007 (00:21:57)
arrrrrrgh, you're making me cry

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Very subtle - the th (Score: 1 )
by chameleon on Friday, June 15, 2007 (09:02:19)
Very subtle - the third stanza sneaks up and delivers a sudden, powerful punch. The repetition might have been heavy-handed, but it works for me. I like this a lot.

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beaut ! (Score: 1 )
by anna9 on Friday, April 18, 2008 (00:56:50)
beaut !

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