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the office

by kylebank

fingers streaked with ink
pallid fluorescent light
a fraudulent laugh





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Re: the office (Score: 1 )
by floatingpoet on Friday, March 11, 2011 (22:53:01)
no way dude your from BC. home of the BC bud! yaz know da smokin kind mon! ha ha ha ha! on the poem gives it a ten

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    Re: the office (Score: 1 )
    by kylebank on Friday, March 11, 2011 (23:03:50)
    hahah, everywhere i go, people know the BC Bud....

    thanks for the vote and for stopping by!

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Re: the office (Score: 1 )
by ken2shoes on Wednesday, April 13, 2011 (21:07:36)
I like this - especially the fraudulent laugh

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    Re: the office (Score: 1 )
    by kylebank on Wednesday, April 13, 2011 (21:30:21)
    I call it my "bank laugh"

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Re: the office (Score: 1 )
by mamta on Thursday, April 14, 2011 (13:05:13)
there is a typo in fluorescent. was posting this in staff picks. thought i would let you know.

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Re: the office (Score: 1 )
by tomfoster51 on Sunday, April 17, 2011 (09:19:18)
K-Very nice tight work. Crisp imagery. Loved the last line

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Re: the office (Score: 1 )
by FuchsiaFestival! on Saturday, June 23, 2012 (21:25:28)
Paints a 'white picture' in my mind, and almost has a spacey feeling. That's just what it gives me because of line two. I guess being in your office you do have a 'bank laugh.' I read this in the picks.

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    Re: the office (Score: 1 )
    by kylebank on Friday, August 24, 2012 (13:57:43)
    I actually call it the "bank laugh". It's very fake, and very full, but hollow

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