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Smell It

by raw

Is there anything sweeter
Then the morning smell.
It’s aroma tantalizing every so stimulating
That sweet, sweet smell.
Upon wrinkled sheets drifting by
Catching the nose to arouse.
Can you smell it?
Her soft moan mentions yes,
Nodding to confirm.
A soft kiss stirs the thought
To rise……. slowly from the warmth.
Upon return she lays and smiles
At me, standing with two, cups of coffee.
Smell it.

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Re: Smell It (Score: 1 )
by floatingpoet on Saturday, March 12, 2011 (19:17:52)
oh dat bee'z a good ones! I can just smells it'z fum here and I'z be lovin dim coffee now mon! If you'z bee'z needin'z a good sea story fum yaz old Cap-pin Mike din'z I'z got'z one in me pockets I'z thinks yaz mite like. you come'z and sea'z waz up and de old cap-pin will fixes yaz up! Capt. Mike! ps It bee'z smellin so good I'z gives yaz a ten'z

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Re: Smell It (Score: 1 )
by Tamara on Sunday, March 13, 2011 (17:17:52)
Nice twist on a "love story," with seductive imagery.

Great job.



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Re: Smell It (Score: 1 )
by badmalthus on Monday, March 14, 2011 (01:59:57)
Clever & tantalizing raw...but the smell of early morning coffee is superb...haha.

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