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YELLOW SUN, WHITE MOON

by dav.smith

For today cannot begin, until we let yesterday cease

Carry on your heart, it's fond memories

And bring joy to the rising of today.





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Re: YELLOW SUN, WHITE MOON (Score: 1 )
by jean on Sunday, April 17, 2011 (22:02:43)
nice poem

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    Re: YELLOW SUN, WHITE MOON (Score: 1 )
    by dav.smith on Monday, April 18, 2011 (08:36:55)
    thanks Jean

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Re: YELLOW SUN, WHITE MOON (Score: 1 )
by induce on Monday, April 18, 2011 (01:30:24)
dAVE, I enjoy the spatial elements and scale of your write, very circular with a night and day thrown in. I like your use of colour and minimalism.

All the best,

Your Aussie buddy,

andyE

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    Re: YELLOW SUN, WHITE MOON (Score: 1 )
    by dav.smith on Monday, April 18, 2011 (08:38:25)
    Thank you Obi, You wise words give me pleasure in reading them. My you find the light that burns for you. Peace my friend, dAVE

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Re: YELLOW SUN, WHITE MOON (Score: 1 )
by Keeperofhope on Monday, April 18, 2011 (11:15:53)
wow this is a great write thanks for sharing
KOH

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    Re: YELLOW SUN, WHITE MOON (Score: 1 )
    by dav.smith on Monday, April 18, 2011 (18:10:05)
    thank you my friend, May yor hopes deliver your dreams.dAVE

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Re: YELLOW SUN, WHITE MOON (Score: 1 )
by Ilan on Thursday, April 21, 2011 (18:58:48)
I agree with spatial praises by Andye
this is very beautiful and makes
me proud to know you,
really special soul driven liked!!

Kind regards....ilan

Ps, darn good title!!!!

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    Re: YELLOW SUN, WHITE MOON (Score: 1 )
    by dav.smith on Friday, April 22, 2011 (05:37:27)
    Ilan Thanks for the read and comment. Hope all is well in your house. I must say I quite like this one myself. Cheers my southern friend. dAVE

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