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Poems - New York, New York
| | New York, New Yorkby maryanns
I watched you revel
far into the night
I heard your joyous voices
singing the national anthem
at the top of your hungry lungs.
Yes, I saw your happy faces
trying desperately to forget
the incredible tragedy
that befell Lower Manhattan…
the scar that will never heal
in spite of the ten year struggle
to find one individual man
a symbol of unfathomable pain
elusive yet always an inescapable
affront to your eight million people.
Your incredible skyline
may never look the same
but New York, New York
you will forever remember
the night the avengers came.
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Re: New York, New York
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by Ilan on Tuesday, May 03, 2011 (21:46:40) |
Hail new York, a good ode to the city
that suffered,
Kind rgs
Ilan
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Re: New York, New York
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by maryanns on Wednesday, May 04, 2011 (14:24:55) |
Thank you so much, Ilan...
at first I was sickened by their actions,
celebrating the death of any man...
but upon further reflection and consideration
I believe, instead of reveling over death
most were overcome by a sense of closure
many New Yorkers thought would never come.
An eight million person exhale...
Thanks again, Ilan. Best wishes, Mary Ann
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Re: New York, New York
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by FuchsiaFestival! on Tuesday, May 03, 2011 (22:23:18) |
I agree with Ilan, this poem is a piece that resonates with the somber destruction that shook the grounds of the World Trade Center, kicking the hearts of those who did laugh and play. Beautiful tribute, beautiful.
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Re: New York, New York
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by maryanns on Wednesday, May 04, 2011 (14:29:53) |
There, as you said it... somber.
I, just as many other Americans
would have preferred a deep sigh of relief
to what we saw televised... However,
we weren't present when the towers fell.
Thanks so much, Sammi - Mary Ann
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Re: New York, New York
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by ossy on Wednesday, May 04, 2011 (04:42:43) |
I see a cause being met in this piece, at long.
great write from one of gp's best poet.
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Re: New York, New York
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by maryanns on Wednesday, May 04, 2011 (14:36:07) |
Thank you, Ossy - I appreciate your view of this...
neither of us experienced their trauma first hand,
it was overwhelming to simply see the carnage
televised over and over again in 2001...
maybe the City of New York can now truly move on.
Thanks again, Mary Ann
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Re: New York, New York
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by Zbird on Wednesday, May 04, 2011 (08:13:27) |
beautifully said my friend. a wonderful tribute.
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Re: New York, New York
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by maryanns on Wednesday, May 04, 2011 (14:42:16) |
Thanks so much, Bonnie... I wrestled with the subject just like every other poet must have. Celebrating killing...
On the other hand, if he had been captured alive we'd never hear the end of it, would we? Thanks again, my friend. Mary Ann
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Re: New York, New York
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by omegapaf on Wednesday, May 04, 2011 (08:59:12) |
" new york, new york...so good they named it twice "
baaaaaad mistake attacking new york. they are like people from sunderland. like " heyyyyy you arsehole, do you think we are gonna put up with this s**t? ".......good job they didn't attack new jersey.....eeerrrr i mean noy joysey. my mate steffie just wouldn't have stood for it - avengers forever - paul.
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Re: New York, New York
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by maryanns on Wednesday, May 04, 2011 (14:50:07) |
I love the song... 'ol blue eyes, the old days of Broadway shows that play on forever. The Big Apple, Metropolis, the City That Never Sleeps... Awww, let 'um revel, get it all out of their system!
Love your accent, Paul - I detect Brooklyn or maybe Queens...
All the debris ended up in Joisey, eh? I hope the target's off everybody's sturdy backs!
Thanks ever so much - Mary Ann xoxoxo
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Re: New York, New York
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by Daniel on Wednesday, May 04, 2011 (16:01:06) |
Beautiful Poem
that show great feelings
and imagery of a great city
through Happiness and
Sadness. I really
reading your Poem,
Mary-Ann.
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Re: New York, New York
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by maryanns on Thursday, May 05, 2011 (20:59:57) |
Thank you so much, Daniel...
I know we were all affected
when the tragedy happened
but some more than others.
Anywy, I suppose it was ok
that they had a celebration.
Thanks again, my friend. Mary Ann
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Re: New York, New York
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by electrictiger on Thursday, May 05, 2011 (08:23:04) |
Deeply heartfelt writing.
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Re: New York, New York
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by maryanns on Thursday, May 05, 2011 (21:02:02) |
Thank you, Chris - I don't approve of killing-killing-killing... so I guess I had to find another way to address the subject. I hope it all settles down soon. Thanks again, Mary Ann
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Re: New York, New York
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by Lewtoo on Thursday, May 05, 2011 (10:42:15) |
The happy faces
It makes me wonder
About what kind of spell
The human race is under
This poem touched me
And touched me hard
Why don’t we just kill
Somebody and have a party
In our back yard
As usual I Love you and your poem too, Lew
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Re: New York, New York
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by maryanns on Thursday, May 05, 2011 (21:05:22) |
What you said in your comments...
exactly the way I feel as well.
What were they thinking? But then
I see the towers in all sorts of films,
and it brings back the whole thing.
Thank you, Lew. Mary Ann
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Re: New York, New York
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by WordLover on Thursday, May 05, 2011 (10:43:53) |
What a wonderful and heartfelt tribute to a great city, that may have been down, but never out! Your poem captures the hope and promise of a new day and better times - all the while knowing that none of us will - ever forget! Beautiful job, as alway my friend.
Sandy
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Re: New York, New York
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by maryanns on Thursday, May 05, 2011 (21:08:47) |
Hope and promise... may they soon come true. No more squabbling. just healing. Thank you so much, Sandy - your comments made me feel a lot better. Now may it all just settle down... Hey thanks again and take care, Mary Ann
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Re: New York, New York
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by BrokenWordsPoet on Thursday, May 05, 2011 (10:54:45) |
Very nice... I have been collecting things that showed the twin towers and one of the things I have is a Crystal with the twin towers inside.
Movies filmed in New York before always catch my eyes as a reminder of that day.
I remember right where I was standing when I heard the News and the second plane had not hit yet.
It is great the master mind has paid the price... BWP... James...
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Re: New York, New York
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by maryanns on Thursday, May 05, 2011 (21:17:02) |
Thank you so much, James - pictures of the towers always bring the whole horrible thing back for me too... no matter what the film is about I'm only seeing one thing. You can almost date a film by the Lower Manhattan skyline....
Hey, I almost sent you a "crying on your shoulder" message this morning... but I couldn't even access gotpoetry's website to send it.
I didn't think my problems with gp could get any worse... no messages for over a month, no fix in sight and then I couldn't even log on! I don't know, but hopefully it won't happen again.
Thanks so much, my friend - Best wishes, Mary Ann
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Re: New York, New York
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by omegapaf on Thursday, May 05, 2011 (23:29:04) |
still a few teething troubles with the new server mary ann. i'm not getting any notification of messages either. hope you got my last message ok?.....and they keep asking for my password.....i've no idea what my password is, it's something like jhjhwr6774q368yw4t ha ha. " the bronx is up and the batterys down, the people ride in a hole in the ground " - new york - gene kelly from the film " on the town ". - how is the new house working out? - paul.
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Re: New York, New York
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by badmalthus on Saturday, May 07, 2011 (03:46:06) |
How true Mary Ann...he was a nasty annoying man...adios amigo...great write my friend.
Cheers...Harry
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