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spartans

by omegapaf

when did you fall from the golden hall
for it was a long fall
we used to be very tall

300 spartans are awaiting the bugle's call.

( for a friend of mine in greece )




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Re: spartans (Score: 1 )
by Zbird on Thursday, June 28, 2012 (09:29:47)
now this is awesome! a lot said in those few sentences. so sad for what is happening there.

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    Re: spartans (Score: 1 )
    by omegapaf on Thursday, June 28, 2012 (14:49:13)
    i hope my greek friend see's it.
    " we build all this with our own hands....but who could know that we built on sand.......finally the dream is gone....nothing left to hang it on " - stuart adamson.
    - paul and the spartan hound.

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Re: spartans (Score: 1 )
by maryanns on Thursday, June 28, 2012 (17:37:53)
Always, your hand of generosity and friendship reaches out...
Among the fallen Spartans, I hope he reads it, too. Smile

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    Re: spartans (Score: 1 )
    by omegapaf on Friday, June 29, 2012 (05:30:11)
    a lot of the economies in southern rurope are on the point of collapse. i knew the euro would never work. he is a she by the way.
    some people in greece are living on the streets and the suicide rate has trebled. strange how the german banks are still making enormous profits...hmmmmmm...i think i smell a rat - paul and the warrior hound.

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Re: spartans (Score: 1 )
by Porrohman on Friday, June 29, 2012 (15:56:15)
When are you going to write a poem about the mighty Portuguese empire? Wink

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    Re: spartans (Score: 1 )
    by omegapaf on Saturday, June 30, 2012 (05:42:06)
    ha ha...shhhh ronaldo might be reading this. see you tomorrow old friend to watch those two bankrupt countries battling for the euro footie final trophy - " burn down the disco. hang the blessed D.J. for the music that they constantly play, says nothing to me about my life " - the smiths.
    - paffy, puppy and the mighty portuguese empire.

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Re: spartans (Score: 1 )
by deepali on Saturday, June 30, 2012 (05:34:25)
are your poems getting shorter?
but you've said it all... in these few lines...dear Pauley!

warm wishes,
D.

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    Re: spartans (Score: 1 )
    by omegapaf on Saturday, June 30, 2012 (05:58:08)
    thanks little star. i do tend to cut my poems to the bare minimum lately. i could have rambled on about europeon economic policy, but i thought that was about it really. because spartan has another meaning of course. to quote the oxford english dictionary. spartan - " strict or simple. with no luxuries ".

    " shyness is nice, but shyness can stop you from doing all the things in life you'd like to " ask - the smiths.
    - paul and the sniffy opera hound.

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Re: spartans (Score: 1 )
by butterflyzrfree on Monday, July 02, 2012 (17:24:38)
This is a fantastic write!

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    Re: spartans (Score: 1 )
    by omegapaf on Monday, July 02, 2012 (19:50:13)
    thanks gaily.
    the spartans are awaiting your call....anything i can do to help? - pauly and sniffy.

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      Re: spartans (Score: 1 )
      by gailw on Tuesday, July 03, 2012 (17:21:22)
      Thanks! Smile

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Re: spartans (Score: 1 )
by liarbird on Tuesday, July 03, 2012 (20:50:40)
G'day Paul...
I heard the bugle Paul. Melbourne is either the second or third most populated Greek city...the way things are going it might rise to the top. I think the Greeks in Melbourne have their hands over their ears. Great message in so few words.
Lindsay

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    Re: spartans (Score: 1 )
    by omegapaf on Wednesday, July 04, 2012 (09:33:15)
    " we are just dust in the wind " - socrates.

    so the germans decided to buy europe, instead of conquering it. i'm not racist at all, but maybe nuking the german banks might help ha ha.
    - aaawwwww europe is screwed...when is the next plane to melbourne? - paul and the portable hound.

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Re: spartans (Score: 1 )
by wolfinwindow on Wednesday, July 18, 2012 (16:15:43)
Awesome. A lot said in a few lines
Good job.

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    Re: spartans (Score: 1 )
    by omegapaf on Thursday, July 19, 2012 (12:52:10)
    i hope the southern europeon countries do bust the euro currency. it was a damn stupid idea to start with. thanks wolfie - foxy and sniffy.

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