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Poems - Sweet Sucker

Sweet Sucker

by Unbound

I posted this poem and it didn't reflect even after a few hours and I hadn't saved a copy of it. Jus wrote it out of the blue. SO based on what lil I remembered I made it up again and that is the other poem with the same title. That is the story behind why thr r 2 poems with the same title.... Duh!!! But I am interested to know which one is better....

Colors patched in a patern
On velvetty fragile wings
Now here, soon there
They fly everywhere

One and two and three
There are so many indeed
Blue and white and green
Essence of colors revealed

Enticingly camuoflaged
They love the sweet of flower
Wings bound by freedom
They whiz around the garden

Buttery soft
They soar aloft
Beauty to the eye
Captured in the mind

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Re: Sweet Sucker (Score: 1 )
by StarDust on Tuesday, November 03, 2009 (03:39:13)

lovely akila.....'Beauty to the eye' indeed...

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Re: Sweet Sucker (Score: 1 )
by Unbound on Wednesday, November 04, 2009 (11:49:57)

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Re: Sweet Sucker (Score: 1 )
by Jayelle on Tuesday, November 03, 2009 (05:52:12)

Pretty & delicate~~your words paint a bright, colorful picture. Nice. Joan

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Re: Sweet Sucker (Score: 1 )
by Unbound on Wednesday, November 04, 2009 (11:50:19)

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Re: Sweet Sucker (Score: 1 )
by angeroseblue on Tuesday, November 03, 2009 (09:24:46)

put a smile on my face as i read it
this is so pretty
the flow is nice

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Re: Sweet Sucker (Score: 1 )
by Unbound on Wednesday, November 04, 2009 (11:51:08)

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Re: Sweet Sucker (Score: 1 )
by shazza on Tuesday, November 03, 2009 (15:30:02)

You have held the paintbrush of life this is beautiful
Take care
Shazza

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Re: Sweet Sucker (Score: 1 )
by Unbound on Wednesday, November 04, 2009 (11:51:33)

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Re: Sweet Sucker (Score: 1 )
by WordLover on Tuesday, November 03, 2009 (19:54:23)

This has a soft light feel to it - as you said "Beauty to the eye"! Lovely.

Sandy

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Re: Sweet Sucker (Score: 1 )
by Unbound on Wednesday, November 04, 2009 (11:51:56)

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Re: Sweet Sucker (Score: 1 )
by Liquid_Chaos on Tuesday, November 03, 2009 (23:38:06)

Beautiful and eye-catching. Great write L_C

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Re: Sweet Sucker (Score: 1 )
by Unbound on Wednesday, November 04, 2009 (11:52:20)

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