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Poems - Atomic Shower

Atomic Shower

by Twelve

I feel combustible elements inside of me swirl.
Can't take the day off from the truth of the world.
I am here alone but i feel like a bomb
waiting to explode unable to stay calm.
Anger and anxiety boil over in me
and i am no where near the place that i want to be.
Don't try to stop me don't tell me to chill.
That will only exacerbate my desire to kill.
Provoke me slowly hold me but know me
well enough to feel that the unholy is folding.
I can't walk straight if my focus is lost.
But trust me i can explode even in the cold or the frost.
I'm lost now don't feel quite up to triumph.
More like ready for apocalypse as i die in violence.
I'm unhappy in silence or riot.
What i want is chaos in quiet.
Maybe death stalks me in a quest for power.
And my only cleansing can come from an Atomic Shower.

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Re: Atomic Shower (Score: 1 )
by Dreaming-Demon on Tuesday, November 03, 2009 (23:39:18)

This is excellent, so well done

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Re: Atomic Shower (Score: 1 )
by sschubert on Wednesday, November 04, 2009 (12:43:51)

I enjoyed reading this my favorite lines are:

What i want is chaos in quiet.
Maybe death stalks me in a quest for power.
And my only cleansing can come from an Atomic Shower.

Nice job!

Steph

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