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Poems - Don't talk to strangers

Don't talk to strangers

by Madyakka

Ambiguity's his strength,
compulsion's his weakness.
The ochre sand darkens;
blood cools on hardened steel,
another life taken.
As a parent's nightmare unfolds
dingo's feast.
A sociopath's sinister banquet.

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Tags: Australia, backpackers, serial killers

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Re: Don't talk to strangers (Score: 1 )
by questionajourney on Friday, November 20, 2009 (20:14:39)

this is raw and hardcore...a unique glimpse into the maddened, or so we think THEY are..qaj

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Re: Don't talk to strangers by Madyakka on Friday, November 20

Re: Don't talk to strangers (Score: 1 )
by thewholesoul on Saturday, November 21, 2009 (08:48:32)

dark stuff Dave. the line - "blood cools on hardened steel" really captures the mood of the poem. very well done.

best wishes
conor

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Re: Don't talk to strangers by Madyakka on Saturday, November 21
- Re: Don't talk to strangers by thewholesoul on Saturday, November 21

Re: Don't talk to strangers (Score: 1 )
by butterflyzrfree on Saturday, November 21, 2009 (09:45:40)

For Halloween? Excellent write, as you chose to milimalize it. You could take out the word 'a' in the last line if you like. Nece creepy piece Wink

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Re: Don't talk to strangers by Madyakka on Saturday, November 21

Re: Don't talk to strangers (Score: 1 )
by Ramonez on Sunday, November 22, 2009 (04:15:32)

Jeez, man. I probably don't need to see the movie now. This is way better. And I'm with Conor 'blood cools on hardened steel' is a great line (if you're a serial killer Wink

Awesome stuff, mate.

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Re: Don't talk to strangers by Madyakka on Sunday, November 22

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