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the anonomous low rating scum that gave this piece one star is reflecting their own IQ .....only great masters of poetry have achieved this technical expertise and none with the flare and sensuality I see here......here are ten stars to help negate the effects of a mediocre mind.....peace

Re: Coming Down (Score: 1 ) by Phoebe on Thursday, February 09, 2012 (17:41:33)

Thank you my friend, I know and you know how cool we are - ~Phoebe~


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Heres a ten from me too Phoebe, I cant believe some people on here sometimes.. It's strange but I wrote a similar poem today.

Re: Coming Down (Score: 1 ) by Phoebe on Thursday, February 09, 2012 (22:43:20)

Thank you Wayne, I know you understand - that passion and depth of feeling is in all your lovely writing - I try to follow all your posts, I think I know the one you mean..brilliant as always..


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Phoebe - don't pay a bit of attention to the "anonymous" AS@#$$@ - always too cowardly to show who they really are!! This is a gorgeous poem of love - I especially love the line:

"For in the kingdom of the mind there is no start, no end"
GREAT line, great poem.

Sandy

Re: Coming Down (Score: 1 ) by Phoebe on Friday, February 10, 2012 (15:49:21)

I'm so very appreciative of your comment my friend, you're absolutely right - and what carries me through rubbish like that is the support of those professional and talented poets like yourself who rise above that kind of stupidity and see the value and thought behind poetry that is posted. I've just had an exciting, inspiring and challenging experience of sharing the creation of a Poetic Duet with another professional and talented poet I admire immensely - just another wonderful treasure to add to my precious basket of my life...thank you so much for more than this comment.. - Phoebe


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Oh phoebe sweets. I wish I was the one your looking for. a really nice piece.I dream too. there must be someone out there for you. I'm sure. Someone for all of us keep dreaming. and keep shining. Pete. LOl.

Re: Coming Down (Score: 1 ) by Phoebe on Saturday, February 11, 2012 (00:41:29)

Sweet tyger, you belong to the universe and the universe loves you..thank you for your morale boosting...life is always the sweeter for friendships like yours...-Phoebe


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So sad someone gave you such a low score for a great poem. Gp has changed so much lately. there are some evil people on here, but also, some really nice people too.don't let them get you down. I don't mind, if I get a low rating, I thank them, for a low rating is better than nothing. and that's only their opinion. I know I'm good, so are you. that's all that matters keep your chin up. love and best wishes. Pete. LOL .

Re: Coming Down (Score: 1 ) by Phoebe on Saturday, February 11, 2012 (00:44:57)

I don't mind low rating if the work deserves it - but as you said it was only their opinion and as we all know.... opinions are like ar$eholes.....everybody's got one!!.. ... - Phoebe


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I really thought this low rating episode was over, but I guess not. Brilliant write Phoebe, Hope you find him beyond your dreams. He would be a lucky man I'm sure. Hugs dAVE

Re: Coming Down (Score: 1 ) by Phoebe on Saturday, February 11, 2012 (02:56:35)

Well just between you and me dAVE, I think I've found him - just beyond my dreams..but he is where he should be...and I am where I should be...for me, I think I'm lucky...for him, I don't know, he probably doesn't see it the way I do...but in dreams, there's always hope.. -Phoebe


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Re: Coming Down (Score: 1 ) by dav.smith on Saturday, February 11, 2012 (03:11:28)

The road to happiness is long and rough. But to walk it will pay off in the end. You will have decisions to make as x roads come up. But you will know the direction you need to take, as will he. My wife and I have been together 10+ years and married for 6 this October. it has not been an easy trip but we walk it together and it brings us closer and stronger. I send my wishes to you as you take this walk. Hugs and wonderful future, dAVE


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A particularly beautiful and evocative piece of writing, Phoebe!

Re: Coming Down (Score: 1 ) by Phoebe on Saturday, February 11, 2012 (13:04:48)

Many thanks Ozy, pleased you enjoyed it..-Phoebe


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A ten from me too!!
i can read this a hundred times..........
love,
D.

Re: Coming Down (Score: 1 ) by Phoebe on Saturday, February 11, 2012 (13:05:31)

Hugs Ali, thank you so much..-Phoebe


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