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Poems - *2 hands drooping*

*2 hands drooping*

by wylde


out of the gore
up out of the trenches
the stink of fetid lives
swim draped weeping
out of dry blooded tears
squeezed out of gaping
as charging
over the top
always crippled
in arms hands burst in blisters
in the soothing
of lead and bullets ripping torn thoughts and toxic venoms
tearing integrity apart of life wholed
smattered mud smeared in depravities
applied to the wounds
felt unobvious
while suckling lungs
burst in hope
while the acid
of souls
burned away the caustic
of soles
trampled and smudged
to one iron cross
on lifes whims
in the nails of the madness of sanity
always prevailed
in the curtain shroud
drawn asunder
going over the top

father forgive them
they no not what they do

mantras in meaningless

glass life cracked.

clapppps mortared
thunder is applause


*2 hands drooping*


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Re: *2 hands drooping* (Score: 1 )
by angels on Friday, March 09, 2012 (11:16:51)
...a standing ovation is deserved...

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    Re: *2 hands drooping* (Score: 1 )
    by wylde on Monday, March 12, 2012 (04:32:57)
    ...curtsey....curtsey my love.

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Re: *2 hands drooping* (Score: 1 )
by Audioslave on Friday, March 09, 2012 (12:11:43)
A taste of karma re-incarnated....exhaling from the abode of an iron lung

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    Re: *2 hands drooping* (Score: 1 )
    by wylde on Monday, March 12, 2012 (04:33:35)
    ...and with good ole brain salad surgery. tks man.

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Re: *2 hands drooping* (Score: 1 )
by butterflyzrfree on Friday, March 09, 2012 (15:05:07)
This incredible poem can be read aloud spoken-word. Not your usual, I extremely love it, and would like to read it aloud on internet radio if thats cool with you. I will send you the link.

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    Re: *2 hands drooping* (Score: 1 )
    by wylde on Monday, March 12, 2012 (04:34:46)
    hey hey gaily. go for it!! id love you to do that, and i know you will credit me.


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Re: *2 hands drooping* (Score: 1 )
by KateBurnell on Sunday, March 18, 2012 (06:23:47)

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    Re: *2 hands drooping* (Score: 1 )
    by wylde on Monday, March 19, 2012 (05:43:39)
    kate - you have this unique touch. never plainly decipherable especially in their invisibilities - - but appreciated allways.

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Re: *2 hands drooping* (Score: 1 )
by KateBurnell on Monday, March 19, 2012 (07:27:53)
Nin just laid eyes on Miller for the first time. Sense-ational.

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    Re: *2 hands drooping* (Score: 1 )
    by wylde on Monday, March 19, 2012 (08:26:12)
    wow. what beautiful input and imagery touched with the integrity of your mind and fingers.

    thank you kate.

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Re: *2 hands drooping* (Score: 1 )
by electrictiger on Thursday, March 22, 2012 (19:43:42)
This is powerful. And commentary that seems accurate of all life since it began its struggle. I am glad you do not feel the urge to advise as so many poets do, to wrap your thoughts in cushioned lies. Seeing and saying what one sees is advice enough. 2 hands drooping may well be the meaning of life, a final summation, when all is said and done. This too, begs performance.

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    Re: *2 hands drooping* (Score: 1 )
    by wylde on Friday, March 23, 2012 (04:48:31)
    sitting here. welled up. and with goosies.

    .what more can i say.

    besides an inadequate thank you.


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