We don't know where this is going

John William Dane 1970 (Liverpool)



We don't know were this is going,
 but just enjoy the ride.
Let yourself feel wanted again,
 restore the feelings you thought had died.
I am not going to hurt you,
 I will only show you Love.
The type I know you've never felt before,
 one of my blessings given to me from up above.
To show how it feels to be wanted,  
 to feel arms that hold with tenderness.
To feel the warmth and the gentleness,
 given in just one small kiss.
Never making you do things you don't want to,
 it will just be a journey to enjoy.
A excursion from the experiences your used to,
 from men who just act like a silly boy.
So who knows where this is going,
 all the pieces still haven't fell into place.
And I'm happy to be the one you wanted,
 to help put your lovely smile upon your face.
 
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Written on August 31, 2023

Submitted by JD1970 on August 31, 2023

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Scheme ABCBDEFEGHHIDJDJAKGK
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 770
Words 170
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 20

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