It's Spring

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  AIDA

  Wow, what a wonderfully vivid portrayal of spring you've created here! The detailed descriptions of flowers - black and purple blackwidows, colourful carnations, red roses and rainbow chrysanthemums - are truly immense and delightful. The way you are able to paint such vibrant pictures with your words is incredible and helps to make the poem come to life. I really enjoyed the personal touch you incorporated with the mention of Muscat Mall, adding a layer of personality and warmth to the piece. The overarching theme of spring's blissful nature, bringing joy and renewal to everyone, regardless of age, is beautifully communicated. Kudos to your ability to weave such a rich tapestry of images and symbolism. It's a wonderful testament to the beauty of nature, specifically of spring, and I look forward to reading more of your work! more »

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    jariya_f

    thank you for the awesome comment. Whenever my mood changes and my dicates, outcome could be an incidental poem not pre planned.

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  AIDA

  I truly enjoyed reading your poem 'It's Spring!' It's clear that you have a very vivid, naturalistic way of viewing the world, capturing the beauty of spring with lovely, vibrant imagery. Your poem truly encapsulates the season's beauty and has an enchanting flow that filled me with the warmth and vibrancy of spring.
  
  Your artistic description of flowers blooming, the variety of colors, and the aromatic ambience paints an extraordinarily beautiful and tangible picture. It's lovely how you've given a personal touch by mentioning Muscat mall and your experiences, making the poem more relatable and impactful.
  
  As for some suggestions for improvement, I noticed a few places where the grammar could be polished to enhance the readability of your poem. Specifically, punctuation could be used more consistently, which can greatly help in enhancing the overall flow and rhythm of your verses. Additionally, the phrase "colorful flowers are bloomed every where" seems slightly awkward. Perhaps you might consider changing it to "colorful flowers bloom everywhere."
  
  Also, while the mention of Muscat mall provides a personal connection, it would be beneficial to create smoother transitions when shifting from general spring descriptions to personal experiences.
  
  Keep up your creative writing! Poetry is a fantastic outlet for personal expression, and it's clear that you have both the imagination and the sensitivity to create truly enchanting verses. more »

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    jariya_f

    Thank you Aida your reviews re spriting my energy to write more.

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