Notes from America's free section
"Notes from America's free section"
Note 1 'experiment'
Abandonment soul whimper. Un-moved soul-less blurt. Voices of elsewhere. Depraved Depression. Comparative condition. Couch surrounded by dark mirrored windows. Depraved soul. Uncertain zen. Hard to obtain hair style.
Note 2 'Heat and Light'
Rolling through the hexagonal courtyards. Atrium after atrium in an annex.
Waves across the donning from the sky. In a self made 'dribbling' jewelled ball cap “ I could do anything in a space like this, I could instantly unfold my possible imaginings." Synthesized and re-synthesized into these hyperdimensional objects, superspace spun a galactic ecology of stars, a swarming hive of dragonfly constellations. A sensitive physics experiment in the midst of a drunken bacchanal. Lungs that wave the universe.
Note 3 ' Traveling as a true Self'
Roller coasters, coasting roads,
large rolling waves, we would like to be
As much as we used to be.
A breeze to the deepest of the lungs all about.
Stars like masts and a red sparkling red sparks arc.
Standing in love in the parking lot to the hori-zion.
Spiralling arc of orange in the sky, on the ground, and in the insides
Easiest spirals of warmth in a cheering time.
Note 4 'Reunion'
A bright haze of light
A jaunt around the area
Refreshing relaxation, refreshing the calibrations
The patio for resting
A long warm wash of sun
Breathing and clouds
The windows becoming statically bound
The astro turf ripples like waves on the coast
Held onto holding on by patio lawn chairs
In a heavenly nirvana
So happy to be together in the heigh’ city
Simply wafting as the clouds,
so close to the streaks of white,
as if there is an embrace.
The warm daze of summers time
A trickle of songs to master
The duality that seems for-ever “All is lost if it’s never heard, and all is lost once told.”
Note 5 'friends'
a lighter passed
between friends.
Note 6 'time and perspiration '
Through the doors of time and perspiration
a journey; and how we sprang slowly.
People with some sense of Knowledge,
The dew drips above the ground.
Note 7 'drive'
Drive through the fields of golden dreams and wonder, this wandering.
At night the fields are held by the shimmering darkness.
sung to by the crickets beside the owls
All the insect kingdom seems to pulsate
A sweet sound that helps and the air
to gently go in breaths to the moon
A rail road stretching again into the horizon
Wavery light
Behind the train trestle a town rest'
Note 8 'amber waves of grain'
A justice is the friend of the Magistrate
Amidst the amber waves of grain
Where depression is in session
Ha, well depresion is a session.
Ripple the walls of the lawless.
Our feet wandered us
The white of the mountains
Note 9 'proper'
Free and properly feeling.
The dreams allow for glimpses of proper life.
Bright smiles across many places.
“Oh yess then the minds errors can be fixed, like digital defragmentation! The heart is good at defragmentation! (receives soup)”
Note 11 ' Sometimes'
Sometimes the only way to live
is to focus on what can be seen.
When a search for truth is a search for blindness,
and a law or rule for all may be as the well...
May be as the well seen.
Yet the notion of the spirit immortal
is unheard, unseen, and for no one.
Note 12 ' youthful'
Past the english turnstyles of youth
Chats of fasion
Thorough thoroughfare
Note 13 'Telephone poles'
Posters on telephone poles
band tales
Chalk on sidewalk
childish purity
Wall of wonder
mutual aid
Note14 'Only a desert'
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Into a room
Chair across the way
Echoes in
About this poem
I wrote notes while traveling in America
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Written on June 01, 2016
Submitted by cpennock on April 27, 2024
Modified by cpennock on April 27, 2024
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Scheme | A B X C D X X X E E X X A X F A C G D H A I J X X G E I C X F K X L XL A A E X J M H N X B X X A X O X O A A N N X K H X X X X M P N X P Q A Q X A R R X K X X X |
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Closest metre | Iambic pentameter |
Characters | 3,701 |
Words | 750 |
Stanzas | 80 |
Stanza Lengths | 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 2, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1 |
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