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I revised the punctuation a bit for Boyles’ consideration.

Phillip came to me today,
and said it was time to go.
I looked at him and smiled,
as I whispered that, "I know."
I then turned and looked behind me,
and saw I was asleep.
All my family was around me,
and I could hear them weep.
I gently touched each shoulder,
with Phillip by my side.
Then I turned away and walked,
with my Angel guide.
Phillip held my hand,
as he lead the way,
to a world where Kings and Queens,
are Monarchs every day.
I was given a crown to wear
or a Halo known by some.
The difference is up here,
they are worn by everyone.
I felt a sense of peace,
my reign had seen its end.
70 years I had served my Country,
as the people’s friend.
Thank you for the years,
for all your time and love.
Now I am one of two again,
in our Palace up above.
 

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