Robertl.92681's comments

Like it concise

like it very much ,it says all that needs to be said

Powerful words etched with honesty,the impersonal nature of brutality ,and the denial of human connection.

Brilliant a lovely piece

it was a very difficult choice between this ,poem and at least five others, However it appealed to me for its emotive human expression, It is well written ,with a engaging and consistent cadence ,the lines ,thunder and lightening without the rain are to me ,simply beautiful and deepen the whole experience . more »

Its lovely

That's simply beautiful

Love it, it says so much.

Very nice ,it carries the reader along for the ride

Brilliant

Lovely beautifully put.

i like it bittersweet like life.

love it

I like it, human to human understanding ,not images contrived in the desire factory of the mind.

that's it exactly ,we walk around in vague disorder, struggling to make sense of our own interpretations