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I’m still very new to poetry. Therefore, any feedback is appreciated!

  February 2021     3 years ago

Submitted Poems 5 total

I am “Blank” (short)

I relish in my pain,
Without it I am...

– by Jordan

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My vowel is your word

I speak boldly mute,
A dead man without tell.

A burning hell of thoughts,
A mourning of what I wish for-
but, for what I am...

– by Jordan

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The Space of I and You

I wish for someone who not take the words for what they are
Rather for what they mean

I and you with a space in between-
That space, a void needing a simple word to bare-
However, this is no simple...

– by Jordan

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The Mind of A Poet

“I am a poet”

This must mean I’m a savant of moods, and a wordsmith by craft
Though true, these are after effects-
Understanding they lack

See a poet thinks deeply, and feels deeper

I wouldn’t wish a poetic mind on my worst...

– by Jordan

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The Tempo of My Heart

The tempo of my heart
The tremolo trembling

The staccato of pain soaked needles
And the crescendo of self loathing

A tenor that’s of tender flesh-
Whips of agony play...

– by Jordan

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I liked this especially well since I didn’t read the title first. Left me with 2 different meanings when I looked up at it

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