kali_p
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The circle of life ♾️

If only this poem could be shared with the world!

Touching message, God is within all of us. Amen.

Truths that needed to be said!

And the artist, often not made famous until his death. Interesting…

Optimism in the face of destruction!! We lack for nothing! A golden message

Through Christ all things are possible

Lovely and thoughtful!

UNIVERSAL BALANCE

Pray for us!

The SOURCE!! Powerful!

If only the world could read this together in unison!

and *so* we continue…

What I find most fascinating about this poem is the fact that it seems so well thought out and planned, as if the story were developed and analyzed before having ever been written. But to read your comments below the poem describing how in fact it was written in a free form consciousness is just fascinating. It is almost as if you were ‘dreaming while awake’ while writing this poem, thoughts free-flowing, analyzing your awakened dream as you go…from the castle of a soul to your flowing robes of all that you’ve earned… how very interesting. I have actually always posed a question, my whole life… what if our dreams were in fact reality and our ‘reality’ were but dreams….what would the consequences of this be? How would we react? I suppose I don’t have an answer for that question but as you said best, “life is more than outer image, it is indeed a pilgrimage.”. And do we continue to travel, even to our death, our tombs but a stepping stone to whatever may be next. Very deep and thought provoking work of art you have written. Bravo. more »

The irony brought about by perspective. I think this is my favorite poem thus far!