loopy_lou1983

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  October 2022     1 year ago

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Would you?

If I were to cry,
Would you be there?
Of I were to bleed,
Would you care?
If I were to die,
Would you miss me?
To jump from a bridge,
Or to hang from a tree?

If you were to cry,
Yes I'd be there
If you were to bleed,
Yes I would care,
...

– by louise cruickshank

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Hold on

Hold on..

When you find yourself spiralling down and down some more,
The speeds that you are falling at toward that broken floor,
You need to trust those around you, you really must reach out,
We can help remind you of the positives rather...

– by louise cruickshank

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The real me

I cant take this anymore I just cannot be here,
I dont know what to do, I dont know anything but fear,
This constant stress the constant pain,
I cant describe and I cant explain,
You won't get it because you can't get through,
But don't you...

– by louise cruickshank

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Dear father christmas

Dear father Christmas,
I havent done this for a while,
So please bear with me,
Whilst I try to compose my pile,
I dont want alot for Christmas,
Not what you would expect,
And now the part,

 where you think you can get fecked!
My list is very...

– by Louise Cruickshank

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I want to be free

No one knows how it feels to be me,
Locked in this body, I long to be free,
My brain has all these brilliant ideas ,
My body says no, not happening my dear,
I want to be normal and go to the shop,
I dont want the pain or the "I'm going to drop"...

– by Louise Cruickshank

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